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Commmunity service important in life

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: Community activities are important in life, and I believe that a community activity is meaningful and becomes good when it receives a lot of attention from people, as well as its feasibility and effectiveness. Community projects bring people together, and this is reflected in the project's accuracy of implementation, planning, and impact. Additionally, capital for the fund is an important factor, as is the organization that manages the fund. The most important thing is still the benefits that the community project brings to people and its influence has impacted and helped some people to be aware of a certain issue.
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IELTS essay Commmunity service important in life

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  American English
1 paragraphs
101 words
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