As we know consumer behaviour has changed remarkably by the use of plastic cards like debit cards credit cards and such tremendous changes have completely affected our daily life. It is likely that we will no longer use paper money in near future and will create a friendly and safer cashless society. I partially agree with this perspective.
On the one hand, I totally accept that the development of credit cards and debit cards benefits people a lot. We can easily sum up bills in one payment, efficiently manage accounts and even pick up a luxury handbag or any other product from an overseas website and pay online. There are also extra services which are provided by credit card companies such as payment insurance, protections of shopping etc. Due to the fact, people get used to plastic money which impulsive several companies like Apple and Alibaba to develop further virtual payment such as the mobile wallet. Finally, this trend will lead us to a new generation of cashless society.
On the other hand, the forms of money had transited in our human history several times, from shells, rare metal to plastic money, and now we are still in the period of transition. No one can promise a cashless society will make our payment safer and completely better for the individual. There is a good amount of coverage and news reveal that some people do not revolve their credit and overuse credit card. Furthermore, credit card fraud can happen in several ways, and it is difficult for people to prevent it by themselves or even deal with it. Thus, a cashless society may not equal to a well-protected or more suitable world for everyone.
In conclusion, it seems to me that plastic money improves our life and a society without cash will be coming soon. However, I doubt that there will be much higher in quality and harmless for ordinary people.
As we know consumer
behaviour
has
changed
remarkably
by the
use
of
plastic
cards
like debit
cards
credit
cards
and such tremendous
changes
have completely
affected
our daily life. It is likely that we will no longer
use
paper
money
in near future and will create a friendly and safer cashless
society
. I
partially
agree
with this perspective.
On the one hand, I
totally
accept that the development of
credit
cards
and debit
cards
benefits
people
a lot. We can
easily
sum up bills in one
payment
,
efficiently
manage accounts and even pick up a luxury handbag or any other product from an overseas website and pay online. There are
also
extra services which
are provided
by
credit
card
companies
such as
payment
insurance, protections of shopping etc. Due to the fact,
people
get
used
to
plastic
money
which impulsive several
companies
like Apple and Alibaba to develop
further
virtual
payment
such as the mobile wallet.
Finally
, this trend will lead us to a new generation of cashless society.
On the other hand
, the forms of
money
had transited in our human history several times, from shells, rare metal to
plastic
money
, and
now
we are
still
in the period of transition. No one can promise a cashless
society
will
make
our
payment
safer and completely better for the individual. There is a
good
amount of coverage and news reveal that
some
people
do not revolve their
credit
and overuse
credit
card
.
Furthermore
,
credit
card
fraud can happen in several ways, and it is difficult for
people
to
prevent
it by themselves or even deal with it.
Thus
, a cashless
society
may not equal to a well-protected or more suitable world for everyone.
In conclusion
, it seems to me that
plastic
money
improves
our life and a
society
without cash will be coming
soon
.
However
, I doubt that there will be much higher in quality and harmless for ordinary
people
.
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