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Climate change is a global issue. Discuss its causes and effects on the world.

Climate change is a global issue. Discuss its causes and effects on the world. 3rNm
In the contemporary era, climate change is a controversial topic. It is believed that the whole world must gather together to face this enormous problem; furthermore, find more than one solution to eliminate this threaten. Some people opine that this situation is dangerous, whereas others are sceptical about it; as their first apprehension is focusing on their profits not else. In this essay, I will intend to revise causes and effects. First of all, from a scientific point of view, the main causes of this matter is the exhaust from factories as there are many factors, such as burning of fossil fuel, deforestation and mining activities. In other words, humans are majorly responsible for global warming, for their activities; thus, the problem increase by massive ways daily. To give a specific example, when the thermal power stations burn gases and fuel to get power from them; therefore, the exhausts from these processes exit directly to the atmosphere without any treat process that effect by an imperfect way on the climate of earth. Finally, most governments, especially in the developing countries license their factories to run by this way to produce power at the lowest cost. Furthermore, global warming infects the entire environment to higher risk; consequently, the overall climate of the Earth has been affected by this phenomenon. To illustrate, the major effects of global warming will threat on every single life; hence, these effects are becoming a big hurdle for the survival of biodiversity. For instance, many plant and animal species that are not able to manage the changes in the climatic conditions have extinct, and many more are close to extinction. What can say is that these factors not only is effected on people who lived beside these industrial projects, but also provide an eminent thread on whole humans. In conclusion, after this essay has provided the causes and effects of climate changes, it can be claimed that global warming is pivotal to all mankind. I believe that all governments with the international foundations have to understand the seriousness of these environmental issues; hence, issue many laws to control on the industrial unhealthy factories.
In the contemporary era,
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climate
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change
is a controversial topic. It
is believed
that the whole world
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must
gather together to face this enormous problem;
furthermore
, find more than one solution to eliminate
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this threaten
.
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Some
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people
opine that this situation is
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dangerous
, whereas others are
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sceptical
about it; as their
first
apprehension is focusing on their profits not else. In this essay, I will intend to revise causes and effects.

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First of all
, from a scientific point of view, the main causes of this matter is the exhaust from factories as there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
factors, such as burning of fossil fuel, deforestation and mining activities.
In other words
, humans are
majorly
responsible for
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global
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
warming
, for their activities;
thus
, the problem increase by massive ways daily. To give a specific example, when the thermal power stations burn gases and fuel to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
power from them;
therefore
, the exhausts from these processes exit
directly
to the atmosphere without any treat process that
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effect
by an imperfect way on the
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climate
of earth.
Finally
, most
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governments
,
especially
in the
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developing countries
license their factories to run by this way to produce power at the lowest cost.

Furthermore
,
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global
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warming
infects the entire environment to higher
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risk
;
consequently
, the
overall
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climate
of the Earth has been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
affected
by this phenomenon. To illustrate, the major effects of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
global
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warming
will threat on every single life;
hence
, these effects are becoming a
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big
hurdle for the survival of biodiversity.
For instance
,
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many
plant and animal species that are not able to manage the
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changes
in the climatic conditions have extinct, and
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many
more are close to extinction. What can say is that these factors not
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only
is effected
on
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people
who
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lived
beside these industrial projects,
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but
also
provide an eminent thread on whole humans.

In conclusion
, after this essay has provided the causes and effects of
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climate
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
, it can
be claimed
that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
global
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
warming
is pivotal to all mankind. I believe that all
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
governments
with the international foundations
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have to
understand the seriousness of these environmental issues;
hence
, issue
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many
laws to control on the industrial unhealthy factories.
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IELTS essay Climate change is a global issue. Discuss its causes and effects on the world.

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356 words
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