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Do you agree of disagree with the following statement? Classmated are a more important influence than parents on a chil's success in school> Use specific reasons and sxamples to support your anwer.

Schoolchildren spend most part of the day at school. During lessons and breaks, on their way home, even during after-class activities children communicate with their classmates. Opinions differ whether a child's success at school is influenced by their classmates more, than by parents. This matter is really open to debate. In the paragraphs bellow I will discuss both points and express my opinion supporting the idea that classmates have a vital impact on a child's success at school.

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IELTS essay Classmated are a more important influence than parents on a chil's success in school> Use specific reasons and sxamples to support your anwer.

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American English

1 paragraphs

78 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

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Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.0

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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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