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Do you agree of disagree with the following statement? Classmated are a more important influence than parents on a chil's success in school> Use specific reasons and sxamples to support your anwer.

Schoolchildren spend most part of the day at school. During lessons and breaks, on their way home, even during after-class activities children communicate with their classmates. Opinions differ whether a child's success at school is influenced by their classmates more, than by parents. This matter is really open to debate. In the paragraphs bellow I will discuss both points and express my opinion supporting the idea that classmates have a vital impact on a child's success at school.
Schoolchildren spend most part of the day at school. During lessons and breaks, on their way home, even during after-
class
activities children communicate with their classmates. Opinions differ whether a child's success at school
is influenced
by their classmates more, than by parents. This matter is
really
open to debate. In the paragraphs bellow I will discuss both points and express my opinion supporting the
idea
that classmates have a vital impact on a child's success at school.
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IELTS essay Classmated are a more important influence than parents on a chil's success in school> Use specific reasons and sxamples to support your anwer.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
78 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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