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childen are often told that they can achieve anything

childen are often told that they can achieve anything 0E19O

Firstly, I think the main advantage is that children from childhood would be believe in their self and be motivating. As a result, teenagers will develop skills and unleash their creativity. Also, this message a good reason to push for achieving their goals in future. But there are some advantages such as opportunity to come disappointment or have a depression because of unsuccessful attempts for doing something.

Firstly
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 the main advantage is that children from childhood would be Consider using the past participle "believed"?believed
believe
 in their self and be motivating. As a result
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
teenagers
 will develop This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and unleash their creativity. Also
, this message a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 reason to push for achieving their goals Did you mean: "in the future"?in the future
in future
.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 advantages such as opportunity to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 disappointment or have a depression This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of unsuccessful attempts for doing something. 