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City hospital before and after

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The pictures illustrate the development of road connecting the City Hospital from the year 2007 to 2010. The changes involved are mainly in bus stop, car parking and road pattern. In 2007, there was only a single car parking area where both the staff and the public should park. Also, there was a bus stop on the eastern side of the Hospital which is a bit far from Hospital, and a ring road surrounding the Hospital. In 2010, two roundabouts were introduced, one connecting the hospital road and the city road, other connecting the ring road and the hospital road. Apart from these, a bus station is present between the two roundabouts and linking with it on the either side. Before, the hospital had only one entrance, now(in 2010) another entrance has been constructed with a new car parking for the public. This entrance is for public who can come to the hospital from the car parking after parking their car. Similarly, the old entrance remains with the same purpose except it allows only parking of staff cars. The new development has made it easier for public to access the Hospital. The Bus station is nearer. There is enough space to park the cars. Overall, this improvement fulfills the quality of hospital infrastructure.
The pictures illustrate the development of
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road
connecting the City
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Hospital
from the year 2007 to 2010. The
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changes
involved are
mainly
in bus
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stop
,
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car
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parking
and
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road
pattern.

In 2007, there was
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only
a single
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car
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parking
area where both the staff and the
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public
should park.
Also
, there was a bus
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stop
on the eastern side of the
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Hospital
which is a bit far from
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Hospital
, and a ring
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road
surrounding the
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Hospital
. In 2010, two roundabouts
were introduced
, one connecting the
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hospital
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road
and the city
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road
, other connecting the ring
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road
and the
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hospital
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road
. Apart from these, a bus station is present between the two roundabouts and linking with it on the either side.
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Before
, the
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hospital
had
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only
one
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entrance
,
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now
(in 2010) another
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entrance
has
been constructed
with a new
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car
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parking
for the
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public
. This
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entrance
is for
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public
who can
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come
to the
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hospital
from the
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car
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parking
after
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their
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.
Similarly
, the
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old
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entrance
remains with the same purpose except it
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allows
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only
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parking
of staff cars.

The new development has made it easier for
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public
to access the
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Hospital
. The Bus station is nearer. There is
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enough
space to park the
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cars
.
Overall
, this improvement fulfills the quality of
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hospital
infrastructure.
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IELTS essay City hospital before and after

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
213 words
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