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If the writer conveys his thoughts through words, the photographer conveys his content through each image. There are a number of fascinating photographs taken from numerous places all over the world. On the contrary perhaps the one that I find alluring is the one above — a picture taken by a Vietnamese artist and entered the top 14. Travel-themed picture in the World Photography contest with more than two hundred participating countries. Firstly, I think this photo is beautiful due to the fact the color and light of the photo are really balanced, for example we have a pretty deep watercolor scene, the water lilies with pink color adorn the picture more harmony and color. Secondly, the picture has a supremely good composition, for instance not only has marvelous natural scenery but also people, two things on the water background as complementary to together create an extraordinary attraction, flowers. Guns are beautiful in light of the fact that of their colors, people are magnificent because of their beauty at work. The last thing I think is also what I like most about the painting is the meaningful message and content that the photographer wants to convey. That is the image of the amazing natural landscape in Vietnam, along with the image of the industrious Vietnamese people. In particular, the image of water lilies up in an S-shape in the shape of Vietnam adds to the value of promoting our country to international friends. Those are the reasons that I think this photo is really beautiful and needs to be known more.
If the writer conveys his thoughts through words, the photographer conveys his content through each
image
. There are a number of fascinating photographs taken from numerous places all over the world.
On the contrary
perhaps the one that I find alluring is the one above — a
picture
taken by a Vietnamese artist and entered the top 14. Travel-themed
picture
in the World Photography contest with more than two hundred participating countries.
Firstly
, I
think
this photo is
beautiful
due to the fact the
color
and light of the photo are
really
balanced,
for example
we have a pretty deep watercolor scene, the water lilies with pink
color
adorn the
picture
more harmony and
color
.
Secondly
, the
picture
has a
supremely
good
composition,
for instance
not
only
has marvelous natural scenery
but
also
people
, two things on the water background as complementary to together create an extraordinary attraction, flowers. Guns are
beautiful
in light of the fact that of their colors,
people
are magnificent
because
of their beauty at work. The last thing I
think
is
also
what I like most about the painting is the meaningful message and content that the photographer wants to convey.
That is
the
image
of the amazing natural landscape in Vietnam, along with the
image
of the industrious Vietnamese
people
.
In particular
, the
image
of water lilies up in an S-shape in the shape of Vietnam
adds
to the value of promoting our country to international friends. Those are the reasons that I
think
this photo is
really
beautiful
and needs to
be known
more.
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IELTS essay Choose the photo you think good

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
261 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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