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Childrens behaviour in schools is getting worse than before

Childrens behaviour in schools is getting worse than before 6Kyw3
It is undoubtedly the case that attitudes of kids have changed a lot ever before at school. There several reasons for this problem and various measures could be taken by teachers and parents to improve the situation. There are a variety of different factors that led to aggressive behaviour. One of the major causes can be that the effects of current busy lifestyle parents can't take attention to their children wholly. Instead of it, children are becoming more fond of phones and watching tv. Besides, human interactions of people who around us like parents, relatives, friends and even the upbrings environment can influence one's temper or character. School students may display their behaviour at school as well as was at home. A recent study found that most of the impolite children had the same as personality with their parents. If they are not controlled by parents when their attitude is going to wrong, they will not able to define what they are doing with bad-mannered at school. Considering the sollutions, students should be given a positive mind by grownups lessons in the family academy and must be supplied best upbringing edu from accountable teachers as well. We had mentioned above that parents are model of their children. Therefore, parents should be informed conducts of their children and support them some moral. In school, teachers can give them guide to build their personality as addintion teaching textbooks' contents. Some datas show that training and learning can be an influence on this position. To sum up, changes in teenagers' behaviour might be problem that shouldn't be ignored and must be fixed immideately. I believe that adults can improve all without difficulties to realise soon as conrast to children.
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the case that attitudes of kids have
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changed
a lot ever
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before
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school
. There several reasons for this problem and various measures could
be taken
by teachers and
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parents
to
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improve
the situation. There are a variety of
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different
factors that led to aggressive
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behaviour
. One of the major causes can be that the effects of
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current
busy lifestyle
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parents
can't take attention to their
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children
wholly.
Instead
of it,
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children
are becoming more fond of phones and watching
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tv
.
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, human interactions of
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people
who around us like
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parents
, relatives, friends and even the
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upbrings
environment can influence one's temper or character.
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School
students may display their
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behaviour
at
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school
as well
as was at home. A recent study found that most of the impolite
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children
had the same as personality with their
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parents
. If they are not controlled by
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parents
when their attitude is going to
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wrong
, they will not able to define what they are doing with
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bad
-mannered at
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school
. Considering the
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sollutions
, students should be
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given
a
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positive
mind by grownups lessons in the family academy and
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must
be
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upbringing
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edu
from accountable teachers
as well
. We had mentioned above that
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parents
are model of their
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children
.
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,
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parents
should
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conducts of their
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children
and support them
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some
moral. In
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school
, teachers can give them guide to build their personality as
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addintion
teaching textbooks' contents.
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Some
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datas
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show
that training and learning can be an influence on this position. To sum up,
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changes
in
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teenagers
'
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behaviour
might be problem that shouldn't be
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ignored
and
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must
be
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fixed
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immideately
. I believe that adults can
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improve
all without difficulties to
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realise
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soon
as
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conrast
to
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children
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IELTS essay Childrens behaviour in schools is getting worse than before

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
286 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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