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Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. with this opinion? qgAE

Nowadays, families in the world divided into two categories, poor families and wealthy families. Therefore, children will grow up in a family that has a large amount of money or a family that has a lack of income resources. So, the question is, how will the variation in the income amount influence children approach to deal with the problems of adult life? In this essay, I will discuss this issue and drawing my opinion. In terms of the positive side of growing up in wealthy, families the child will have the luxury of learning and acquiring the knowledge supporting him to deal with the problems of adult life, the substantial reason given to support this claim is that child’s parents will spend the money to teach their children in schools and universities to qualify them to treat their problems.

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, children will grow up in a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
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 that has a large amount of money or a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
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 that has a lack of income resources. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, the question is, how will the variation in the income amount influence children approach to deal with the problems of adult life? In this essay, I will discuss this issue and drawing my opinion.

In terms of the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 side of growing up in wealthy, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
families
 the child will have the luxury of learning and acquiring the knowledge supporting him to deal with the problems of adult life, the substantial reason This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 to support this claim is that child’s parents will spend the money to teach their children in schools and universities to qualify them to treat their problems. 