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Children today are less active than they were on the past

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Many people say that these day children not as active as much time than they were in the past. Some people think that school should provide more time for PE class. However, I disagree with some reasons. In this essay I will explain why. Firstly, Nowadays physical education provide student to know how to be teamwork and forgiveness. Some sport for example football, basketball, volleyball are playing as a team, so there might have a mistake, Then they will learn to apologize. There are many hours that kids study in a week, if children do some exercise there will rest their brain. To sum up, I agree with today kids are less active than they were in the past because they have social media or games that attractive them more than exercise. However, I disagree with the school should provide more time to study physical education because they might tried to study next class.

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