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Children should not receive money for doing household chores

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Finally, my group does not agree that children should be paid for performing home duties for the following reasons: Household chores are a necessary part of family life. In the family, doing home tasks is a shared obligation. Instead of offering the kids money, you might say something such as "nice job" or "I am proud of you. " And, of course, everything has two sides, including money. If you continually offer money to kids for doing tasks around the house, they will learn to be pragmatic and only do it when they have money. That's all I have to say about the topic. Thank you for taking the time to listen.
Finally
, my group does not
agree
that children should
be paid
for performing home duties for the following reasons:

Household chores are a necessary part of family life.

In the family, doing home tasks is a shared obligation.

Instead
of offering the
kids
money, you might say something such as
"
nice job
"
or
"
I am proud of you.
"


And,
of course
, everything has two sides, including money. If you
continually
offer money to kids for doing tasks around the
house
, they will learn to be pragmatic and
only
do it when they have money.

That's all I
have to
say about the topic.

Thank you for taking the time to listen.
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IELTS essay Children should not receive money for doing household chores

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
112 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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