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Children nowadays watch TV programmes more than ever before.

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Nowadays lots of teenagers watch TV programmes more than others. It is harmful their healthy, for example, to their eyesight, brain and radiate. Some children spend their time watching TV and their eyes and they need to wear glasses. So that it's damaged their brains, as a result of they lack of memory and everytime they forget everything. In addition when they learn foreign languages. They can't remember new words. Spending whole day to watch TV leads to radiation, which causes cancer. Some adults waste their time with watching TV. That's why they lack of knowledge than your peers. Besides it affects their outlook, for example, the films which are not appropriate their age may make them socially isolated and even leads to become violent. As well as watching TV all day or more is very monotonous.
Nowadays lots of
teenagers
watch
TV
programmes
more than others. It is harmful their healthy,
for example
, to their eyesight, brain and radiate.
Some
children spend their time watching TV and their
eyes and
they need to wear glasses.
So
that it's damaged their brains,
as a result
of they lack of memory and
everytime
they forget everything. In
addition
when they learn foreign languages. They can't remember new words. Spending whole day to
watch
TV leads to radiation, which causes cancer.
Some
adults waste their time with watching TV. That's why they lack of knowledge than your peers.
Besides
it affects their outlook,
for example
, the films which are not appropriate their age may
make
them
socially
isolated and even leads to become violent.
As well
as watching TV all day or more is
very
monotonous.
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IELTS essay Children nowadays watch TV programmes more than ever before.

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