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Children learning to recycle

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Children are the seeds of the future world. They are the pillars and building blocks for the future. With increase in carbon emission and increase in green house gases, it is mandatory for all the care givers to teach recycling to the future generations. Now, the question of who should focus more into it arises. Teaching from parents are irreplaceable. Any child would love to learn new things from parents. But, how practical it is to teach recycling in daily basis by every family. If both the parents in the family are working then we may end up not teaching the toddler effectively on recycling. Hence to train the kid and make the kid understand the pros of recycling schools would be the right choice. It serves the time and the kid would be more interested to learn new activities as a group. Would be encouraged to do more looking at other children doing it and so on. Nevertheless it is a combined effort of both school and family to truly achieve the goal to teaching children recycling and avoiding waste
Children are the seeds of the future world. They are the pillars and building blocks for the future. With increase in carbon emission and increase in green
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house
gases, it is mandatory for all the care givers to teach
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recycling
to the future generations.
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Now
, the question of who should focus more into it arises. Teaching from parents are irreplaceable. Any child would
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love
to learn new things from parents.
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But
, how practical it is to teach
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recycling
in daily basis by every family. If both the parents in the family are working then we may
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end
up not teaching the toddler
effectively
on recycling.

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Hence
to train the kid and
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make
the kid understand the pros of
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recycling
schools would be the right choice. It serves the time and the kid would be more interested to learn new activities as a group. Would
be encouraged
to do more looking at other children doing it and
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so
on.
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Nevertheless
it is a combined effort of both school and family to
truly
achieve the goal to teaching children
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recycling
and avoiding
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waste
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IELTS essay Children learning to recycle

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
180 words
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