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“Children all over the world should learn to speak a single, universal language fluently in addition to their native language.” To what extent do you agree or disagree?

“Children all over the world should learn to speak a single, universal language fluently in addition to their native language. ” aE7yV
Nowadays, a second language is essential and also widely used all over the world, considered an important language of communication for interacting with people. Therefore, it is suggested that children should learn a second language instead of just using native words to become global citizens. Some people think that the ability to speak another language is unnecessary for them. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the idea that children should learn a new language for the following reasons. Firstly, multilingualism is the best way to develop social skills in children. Rather, we can expand our horizons and knowledge through the knowledge of celebrities from all over the world as well as the fact that young players will easily communicate with friends of different nationalities. every person should have the ability of universal wording so that they can communicate with everybody all over the world. For example, English is considered a common word all over the world today. English helps them acquire a lot of knowledge based on textbooks, the internet, or some teachers who regularly use English throughout their abilities. Second, learning a foreign language is an opportunity to help teenagers in the future. Because most companies require employees to know more than a language like English or Chinese to be able to communicate with employees and customers from different countries. In addition, this is a competitive opportunity for workers with higher wages. For example, two people are interviewing at the same company and field, but the first person is fluent in two different languages, while the second person only knows his mother tongue. As a result, the first person was appointed to this position. This is because this individual will work more flexibly and work better than someone who knows only his mother tongue. In conclusion, I would like to say that children should have the skill to speak fluently in the universe terminology. it is undeniable that that learn a new language is not helpful. Not only that, but it also brings various benefits to our lives. Therefore, I agree that learning a new language is beneficial and it is the best way to develop the maturity of teenagers.
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language
is essential and
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world
, considered an
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important
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language
of communication for interacting with
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people
.
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is suggested
that
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children
should learn a second
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language
instead
of
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using native words to become global citizens.
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people
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think
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is unnecessary for them. In my opinion, I
strongly
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agree
with the
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idea
that
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children
should learn a new
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language
for the following reasons.

Firstly
, multilingualism is the best way to develop social
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skills
in
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children
.
Rather
, we can expand our horizons and knowledge through the knowledge of celebrities from all
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over
the
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world
as well
as the fact that young players will
easily
communicate with friends of
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different
nationalities.
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every
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person
should have the ability of universal wording
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so
that they can communicate with everybody all
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over
the
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world
.
For example
, English
is considered
a common word all
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over
the
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world
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today
. English
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helps
them acquire
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a lot of
knowledge based on textbooks, the internet, or
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some
teachers who
regularly
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use
English throughout their abilities.

Second, learning a foreign
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language
is an opportunity to
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help
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teenagers
in the future.
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Because
most
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companies
require employees to know more than a
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language
like English or Chinese to be able to communicate with employees and customers from
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different
countries.
In addition
, this is a competitive opportunity for workers with higher wages.
For example
, two
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people
are interviewing at the same
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company
and field,
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but
the
first
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person
is fluent in two
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different
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languages
, while the second
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person
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only
knows his mother tongue.
As a result
, the
first
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person
was appointed
to this position. This is
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because
this individual will work more
flexibly
and work better than someone who knows
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only
his mother tongue.

In conclusion
, I would like to say that
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children
should have the
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skill
to speak
fluently
in the universe terminology.
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it
is undeniable
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that that
learn a new
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language
is not helpful. Not
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only
that,
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but
it
also
brings various benefits to our
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lives
.
Therefore
, I
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agree
that learning a new
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language
is beneficial and it is the best way to develop the maturity of
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teenagers
.
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IELTS essay “Children all over the world should learn to speak a single, universal language fluently in addition to their native language. ”

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
362 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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