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artificial reefs pros and cons

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Both the reading and listening discusses artificial reefs. The reading states the benefits of artificial reefs while the listening disagrees. Firstly, the reading claims that artificial reefs provide economic raise to small-scale fish business owners. As they are able to produce their own reefs in secret locations. Creating the fishing areas may help the fishers’ local communities and would support them financially with independence. However, the listening insists that artificial reefs are problematic as they attract fish which used to live distantly. Furthermore, this act results in a decrease of the population of fish. Consequently, the making of artificial reeds in secret areas is not safe for safety purpose as the net the fishers use is large and may cause damage to the fisher. Secondly, the asteroids are rich in a few elements and metals. Additionally, the asteroid colony will be beneficial for the selling of precious elements and metals. In contrast, the listening argues that it is not safe. Finally, the reading states that artificial reeds can be made from recycle items like old cars, once the materials are cleaned and make sure that they are chemical free, they can be used to make the reef. This method provides an inexpensive and environmental friendly way of recycling items. On the contrary, the listening points out, that the recycle method of production is not safe and may elicit chemicals that are harmful to the ecosystem

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reefs
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 while the listening disagrees.

Firstly
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccountknowledgelessonstudyversionexamination
reading
 claims that artificial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeachshoalatollcoral reef
reefs
 provide economic raise to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
-scale fish business owners. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 they are able to produce their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
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reefs
 in secret locations. Creating the fishing areas may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 the fishers’ local communities and would support them financially
 with independence. However
, the listening insists that artificial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeachshoalatollcoral reef
reefs
 are problematic as they attract fish which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
distantly
. Furthermore
, this act results in a decrease of the population of fish. Consequently
, the making of artificial reeds in secret areas is not safe for safety purpose as the net the fishers This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 is large and may cause damage to the fisher.

Secondly
, the asteroids are rich in a few elements and metals. Additionally
, the asteroid colony will be beneficial for the selling of precious elements and metals. In contrast
, the listening argues that it is not safe.

Finally
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccountknowledgelessonstudyversionexamination
reading
 states that artificial reeds can be made
 from recycle items like This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 cars, once the materials are cleaned
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 sure that they are chemical free, they can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeachshoalatollcoral reef
reef
. This method provides an inexpensive and environmental friendly way of recycling items. On the contrary
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