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Child labour still found in India what are the reason behind how can overcome it.

Child labour still found in India what are the reason behind how can overcome it. Ry6OV
In this modern epoch, It is irrefutable fact that working children is common in India is beneficial a moot question in this burgeoning world. This essay will discuss the main problems associated with child labour and propose some possible solutions to avoid them. Child labour is biggest problem in India. The main reason of child laboring is poverty and unemployment levels are high in India and free education is limited. For instance, in my neighborhood a boy works as a car cleaner. In the recent survey done by the university of Delhi found that 80% of child laboring is to feed their family. Furthermore, some children are orphan they work for food and shelters. For example, a lot of children work in factories so they can get there shelters and food after work while they pay them very less salary according their work. Last but not the least due to lack of employment opportunities parents do not have adequate job so they can often send them child to work in factories. While on the other hand we can stop child laboring if adult people stop hiring for work. To exemplify, the government of India should impose heavy fine on those people who children work. Secondly The government should be taking care of orphan children and give them free education, food and stay should also be given free. To put forward the government should provide opportunity to work to people and should provide mid-day meal for children. In conclusion it is not the sole responsibility of the government we as a responsible citizen should also come in front to resolve this issue by not an encouraging working of minors.
In this modern epoch, It is irrefutable fact that working
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children
is common in India is beneficial a moot question in this burgeoning world. This essay will discuss the main problems associated with
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child
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labour
and propose
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some
possible solutions to avoid them.

Child
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labour
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biggest
problem in India. The main reason of
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child
laboring is poverty and unemployment levels are high in India and free education
is limited
.
For instance
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child
laboring is to feed their family.
Furthermore
,
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some
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children
are orphan they
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work
for food and shelters.
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,
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a lot of
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children
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work
in factories
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so
they can
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get
there shelters and food after
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work
while they pay them
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very
less salary according their
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work
. Last
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but
not the least due to lack of employment opportunities parents do not have adequate job
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so
they can
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often
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send
them
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child
to
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work
in factories.

While
on the other hand
we can
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stop
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laboring if adult
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people
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stop
hiring for
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work
. To exemplify, the
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government
of India should impose heavy fine on those
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people
who
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children
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work
.
Secondly
The
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government
should be taking care of orphan
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children
and give them free education, food and stay should
also
be
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given
free. To put forward the
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government
should provide opportunity to
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work
to
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people
and should provide mid-day meal for children.

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is not the sole responsibility of the
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we as a responsible citizen should
also
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come
in front to resolve this issue by not an encouraging working of minors.
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IELTS essay Child labour still found in India what are the reason behind how can overcome it.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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