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Changing environment. What can you say about it?

Changing environment. What can you say about it? wOJM3

This research demonstrate that careful adaptation to sea level rise can reduce the cost of coastal impacts dramatically. Diseases can be spread in more than one way. They could not cut down trees, because of high danger of wildfires. Ice in the Arctic Ocean melted to its second-lowest level on record last year. That poor population died because of the terrible famine. Transport measures will cut lead emissions. After the last pandemic period there was a mass extinction.

The verb 'demonstrate' is plural. Did you mean: "This research demonstrates"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?This research demonstrates
This research demonstrate
 that careful adaptation to sea level rise can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the cost of coastal impacts dramatically
. Diseases can be spread
 in more than one way. They could not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 down trees, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of high This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazardrisk
danger
 of wildfires. Ice in the Arctic Ocean melted to its second-lowest level on record last year. That poor population This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :passed away
died
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the terrible famine. Transport measures will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 lead emissions. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 the last pandemic period there was a mass extinction. 