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Write a short email to your friend (about 50 words). Tell your friend your feelings about this and what you plan to do.

Write a short email to your friend (about 50 words). Tell your friend your feelings about this and what you plan to do. OR057
Dear president of the committee, thank you for your request, I really liked the idea and I'll confirm to sign up as supervise one of the students activities with pleasure! I am planning to organize a dance or something related to music, but first I need to discuss it with my student. As far as I concerned, youngers love music and they are more creative in this sphere. I hope I can do my best in order to help to my student. I am always ready to support young students and help them enlarge their knowledge. I hope I'll help to my student to gain another peace of knowledge in this sphere and we'll provide one of the best activities in the club. As requested, we'll provide our availability by tuesday. Yours fairthfully Nargiza Go Home
Dear president of the committee,

thank you for your request, I
really
liked the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
and I'll confirm to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sign
up as supervise one of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
activities with pleasure!

I am planning to organize a dance or something related to music,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
first
I need to discuss it with my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
. As far as I concerned,
Possible spelling mistake found.
youngers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
music and
they are more creative in this sphere. I hope I can do my best in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
. I am always ready to support young
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
them enlarge their knowledge.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope I'll
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
to gain another peace of knowledge in this
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
sphere and
we'll provide one of the best activities in the club. As requested, we'll provide our availability by
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tuesday
.

Yours
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fairthfully
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Nargiza


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IELTS essay Write a short email to your friend (about 50 words). Tell your friend your feelings about this and what you plan to do.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
135 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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