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changes which occur in the beach from 1995 to till now.

changes which occur in the beach from 1995 to till now. Yyx5K
The given pictures illustrate the changes which occur in the beach from 1995 to till now. In 1995 the farm land located North East corner where is opposite side of farmland there were house for accommodation Forest Park located near the farming land Hotel situated at South side of Forest Park Paris website of water there was shop and southside there was Cafe fees import was also built on sea. After 26 years farmland and Forest Park are remove and build Golf and tennis ground for playing car parking also open near the hotel in squarespace apartment construct instead of fish market on beach all the fishing spot remove website of Hotel there are restaurants in in place of socks accommodation facility construct in a North side of the sea.
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which occur in the beach from 1995 to till
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. In 1995 the farm land located North East corner where is opposite side of farmland there were
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house
for accommodation Forest Park located near the farming land Hotel situated at South side of Forest Park Paris website of water there was shop and
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southside
there was
'Cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
Cafe
fees import was
also
built on sea.

After 26 years farmland and Forest Park are remove and build Golf and tennis ground for playing car parking
also
open near the hotel in
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squarespace
apartment construct
instead
of fish market on beach all the fishing spot remove website of Hotel there are restaurants
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in in
place of socks accommodation facility construct in a North side of the sea.
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IELTS essay changes which occur in the beach from 1995 to till now.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
130 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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