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Changes in the family structure and family roles. Are they positive or negative?

Changes in the family structure and family roles. Are they positive or negative? w77Nl
It is obvious that family structure, along with the roles of family members has undergone several significant changes in recent decades. There exist some debates over this topic; however, from my perspective these alterations are undeniably positive. Some conventional family structures and roles have become obsolete. The upward trend for families with both parents working is among the most prominent revolutions. Women keep pursuing higher education and careers even after marriage instead of staying at home and becoming housewives. At the same time, husbands spend more time on domestic tasks which were once attributed to women. In addiction, people now are more inclined to nuclear family rather than extensive one. A recent survey in a high school has showed that only one in fifteen students live in a multigeneration household. These developments exert positive effects on individuals. Firstly, families with double incomes are more likely to have a high living-standard. It is clear that children gain access to prestigious schools for well-rounded education thanks to their parents' large budgets. As the results, they are well equipped with profound knowledge and survival skills to make their career path to prosperity. Also, the whole family stand a golden chance of experiencing good services in term of healthcare, transport or entertainment. Secondly, conflicts among family members can be minimized in nuclear families. People from different age groups and occupations in multigeneration families with contradictory ideas apparently trigger frequent arguments. However, smaller age gap in nuclear families makes it easier for parents to understand their children, which in turn reduce verbal quarrels. In brief, critics raise objections on the loss of traditional values in families, it is inevitable that practical alterations take place to meet the demand of the modern world. Changes in the family structure and family roles. Are they positive or negative?
It is obvious that
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family
structure, along with the roles of
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family
members has undergone several significant
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changes
in recent decades. There exist
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some
debates over this topic;
however
, from my perspective these alterations are
undeniably
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positive
.

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Some
conventional
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family
structures and roles have become obsolete. The upward trend for
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families
with both parents working is among the most prominent revolutions. Women
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keep
pursuing higher education and careers even after marriage
instead
of staying at home and becoming housewives. At the same time, husbands spend more time on domestic tasks which were once attributed to women. In addiction,
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people
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now
are more inclined to nuclear
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family
rather
than extensive one. A recent survey in a high school has
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showed
that
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only
one in fifteen students
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live
in a
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multigeneration
household.

These developments exert
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positive
effects on individuals.
Firstly
,
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families
with double incomes are more likely to have a high living-standard. It is
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clear
that children gain access to prestigious schools for well-rounded education thanks to their parents' large budgets. As the results, they are
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well equipped
with profound knowledge and survival
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skills
to
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make
their career path to prosperity.
Also
, the whole
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family
stand a golden chance of experiencing
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good
services in term of healthcare, transport or entertainment.
Secondly
, conflicts among
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family
members can
be minimized
in nuclear
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families
.
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People
from
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different
age groups and occupations in
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multigeneration
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families
with contradictory
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ideas
apparently
trigger frequent arguments.
However
, smaller age gap in nuclear
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families
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makes
it easier for parents to understand their children, which in turn
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reduce
verbal quarrels.

In brief
, critics raise objections on the loss of traditional values in
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families
, it is inevitable that practical alterations take place to
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meet
the demand of the modern world.
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Changes
in the
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family
structure and
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roles. Are they
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positive
or
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negative
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IELTS essay Changes in the family structure and family roles. Are they positive or negative?

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