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Change in America between 1954 to 2014

Change in America between 1954 to 2014 EwM7q

There are many things changed in America between 1954 to 2014. They destroy the factories, and then they bending airport in my opinion it is better than before. Another change they destroy the garden in front of factories and they make it super market. In addition they remove the local supermarket and replace it to commercial bending. Also, they destroy the museum and replace it to sport stadium. there is one thing they aren’t changed it is petrol station. This changes make economic increases in American. Also, maybe attracts more tourists. In my opinion it is beautiful than before.

There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 things This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 in America Use "between" + "and" not "to."  Try this: "between 1954 and 2014".between 1954 and 2014
between 1954 to 2014
. They This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishruin
destroy
 the factories, and then Did you mean "they're bending", "they are bending", or "they were bending"?they're bendingthey are bendingthey were bending
they bending
 airport in my opinion it is better than This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
. Another This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishruin
destroy
 the garden in front of Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).factories, and
factories and
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it super market. In The comma is probably missing here: "addition, they".addition, they
addition they
 remove the local supermarket and replace it to commercial bending. Also
, they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishruin
destroy
 the museum and replace it to sport stadium. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThere
there
 is one thing they aren’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 it is petrol station. Did you mean "these"?These
This
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 economic increases in American. Also
, maybe attracts more tourists. In my opinion it is Use "(beautiful)" to make a comparison with this adjective.(beautiful)
beautiful
 than This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
. 