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Change in America between 1954 to 2014

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There are many things changed in America between 1954 to 2014. They destroy the factories, and then they bending airport in my opinion it is better than before. Another change they destroy the garden in front of factories and they make it super market. In addition they remove the local supermarket and replace it to commercial bending. Also, they destroy the museum and replace it to sport stadium. there is one thing they aren’t changed it is petrol station. This changes make economic increases in American. Also, maybe attracts more tourists. In my opinion it is beautiful than before.
There are
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things
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changed
in America
Use "between" + "and" not "to." Try this: "between 1954 and 2014".
between 1954 to 2014
. They
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destroy
the factories, and then
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they bending
airport in my opinion it is better than
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before
. Another
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change
they
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destroy
the garden in front of
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
factories and
they
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make
it super market. In
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addition they
remove the local supermarket and replace it to commercial bending.
Also
, they
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destroy
the museum and replace it to sport stadium.
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there
is one thing they aren’t
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changed
it is petrol station.
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This
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changes
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make
economic increases in American.
Also
, maybe attracts more tourists. In my opinion it is
Use "(beautiful)" to make a comparison with this adjective.
beautiful
than
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before
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IELTS essay Change in America between 1954 to 2014

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
99 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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