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challenges your country will face in the next decade

challenges your country will face in the next decade W5EAW
With urbanization comes a lot of social and environmental challenges. In this essay, I will discuss three important challenges India is predicted to face in the next decade, and possible steps to minimise the negative impact. Expansion of cities has resulted in depletion of our country's rich biodiversity. Take the case of the city of Bangalore, where trees are being cut exponentially to make room for the metro expansion project. The loss of forest cover will drastically affect the micro-climate of the city and increase air pollution levels, which is a major health hazard. With the continuous rise in population, a demand-supply problem of natural resources is emerging. Water shortage is likely to be the most dangerous problem of the next decade with experts predicting a complete depletion of fresh water resources within the next couple of years in many major cities. The COVID-19 pandemic has changed the face of education of the future. Both primary and higher level education are now conducted remotely, limiting accesiblity of education to sections of the society that cannot afford electronic gadgets. As such, the strength of our human capital is diminishing. Overcoming these problems is possible only if the government recognises the need to make it a top priority. Taking into account citizens and environmentalists views before cutting down trees is important. The local community is often against forest clearing, but their voices are ignored. Setting up water recycling and rainwater harvesting plants are the need of the hour. Access to primary education is a fundamental right, and the government must take initiaves to provide the necessary gadgets and facilities to students. In conclusion, problems of the next decade are dangerous enough to destroy the planet and careful planning by the government with co-operation from citizens is the only hope for survival.
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social and environmental challenges. In this essay, I will discuss three
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challenges India
is predicted
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next
decade, and possible steps to
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minimise
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impact.

Expansion of cities has resulted in depletion of our country's rich biodiversity. Take the case of the city of Bangalore, where trees are being
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cut
exponentially
to
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make
room for the metro expansion project. The loss of forest cover will
drastically
affect the micro-climate of the city and increase air pollution levels, which is a major health hazard.

With the continuous rise in population, a demand-supply
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problem
of natural resources is emerging. Water shortage is likely to be the most
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dangerous
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problem
of the
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next
decade with experts predicting a complete depletion of fresh water resources within the
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next
couple of years in
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many
major cities.

The COVID-19 pandemic has
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changed
the face of
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education
of the future. Both primary and higher level
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education
are
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now
conducted
remotely
, limiting
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accesiblity
of
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education
to sections of the society that cannot afford electronic gadgets. As such, the strength of our human capital is diminishing.

Overcoming these
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problems
is possible
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only
if the
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government
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the need to
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make
it a top priority. Taking into account citizens and environmentalists views
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before
cutting down trees is
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important
. The local community is
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often
against forest clearing,
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but
their voices are
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ignored
. Setting up water recycling and rainwater harvesting plants are the need of the hour. Access to primary
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education
is a fundamental right, and the
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government
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must
take
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initiaves
to provide the necessary gadgets and facilities to students.

In conclusion
,
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problems
of the
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next
decade are
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dangerous
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enough
to
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destroy
the planet and careful planning by the
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government
with co-operation from citizens is the
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only
hope for survival.
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IELTS essay challenges your country will face in the next decade

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
299 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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