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Certain individuals think that normalized tests of English, like IELTS, are to turn a profit while opponents argue these exams are necessary for communities. Which side do you think is right and why?

Certain individuals think that normalized tests of English, like IELTS, are to turn a profit while opponents argue these exams are necessary for communities. Which side do you think is right and why? RkqbM
Millions of people worldwide take standard English exams each year. Governments and schools around the globe demand that applicants to prove a certain level of English ability through the use of exams like IELTS. These exams are difficult and expensive. Although some people think that standard English exams exist to make money, I think they are necessary for societies to function efficiently and happily.
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worldwide take standard English exams each year.
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Governments
and schools around the globe demand that applicants to prove a certain level of English ability through the
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use
of exams like IELTS. These exams are difficult and expensive. Although
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some
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people
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that standard English exams exist to
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money, I
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they are necessary for societies to function
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and
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IELTS essay Certain individuals think that normalized tests of English, like IELTS, are to turn a profit while opponents argue these exams are necessary for communities. Which side do you think is right and why?

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