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Write an essay about headphones 1)Describe the statement 2)Support each other sides

Write an essay about headphones 1)Describe the statement 2)Support each other sides PVkbB

One of the urgent gadgets which takes an important part of our life are headphones. Because their usage are increasing day by day dramatically. We use headphones in different situations. For instance, when we are driving. However, one of the advantages of headphones are better quality of music or audio. We can hear voice of audio better in crowdy places. Nowadays, we can see some headphones which are without wires. They are connected using bluetooth and we can listen to music from distance of 30-40 metres. In addition are good invention. I guess that if you hear some word in low volume in English when you are slepping you can remember them. On the other hand, using headphones can be cause of illness. When you use much headphones can be cause of hearing lose. It’s sadly if we are deaf. We can not hear anything with this problem. In conclusion, using headphones are necessary for us in present years, but we should be carefully.

One of the urgent gadgets which takes an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 part of our life are headphones. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 their usage are increasing day by day dramatically
.

We This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 headphones in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 situations. For instance
, when we are driving. However
, one of the advantages of headphones are better quality of music or audio. We can hear voice of audio better in Possible spelling mistake found.crowdcrowdsrowdyc rowdycrowd y
crowdy
 places. Nowadays, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 headphones which are without wires. They are connected
 using Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).bluetooth, and
bluetooth and
 we can listen to music from distance of 30-40 Possible spelling mistake. 'metres' is British English.meters
metres
. In Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?addition,
addition
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 invention. I guess that if you hear This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 word in low volume in English when you are Possible spelling mistake found.sleepingsteppingslippingslappingslopping
slepping
 you can remember them.

On the other hand
, using headphones can Did you mean "because"?because
be cause
 of illness. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
Use "many" with countable nouns.many
much
 headphones can Did you mean "because"?because
be cause
 of hearing lose. It’s sadly
 if we are deaf. We can not hear anything with this problem.

In conclusion
, using headphones are necessary for us in present years, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 we should be carefully
. 