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Celebrities in the UK deserve a lesser right to privacy, critically analyze this statement

Celebrities in the UK deserve a lesser right to privacy, critically analyze this statement G32G2
Under dictionary definition, a celebrity is “a famous person, especially in entertainment or sport”. This, thanks to the advances of social media, can now include anyone who has a talent for influencing or a lucky break by going viral. Celebrities and ordinary citizens are ruled under the same law within the UK legal system. However, there are numerous examples of either one being viewed as having a lesser right to privacy within modern day society. This essay will indulge into the statutory aspects of the right to privacy whilst comparing the different reasons for why a celebrity’s’ right to privacy is sometimes viewed as lesser than everyone else. These being mental health, past vs present views, social media and the remedies surrounding privacy protection. From a legislative standpoint, there is no direct right to privacy act for us in the UK, however there is the Equality Act made in 2010, which states “(1)A person harasses another if (b) the conduct has the purpose or effect of (i) violating B’s dignity”. This is the same ruling for both celebrities and ordinary citizens however often ignored for those famous individuals within the UK as shown in the incidents of media harassment. Sadly, this being accepted as normal in the modern day can lead to the devastating end that TV presenter Caroline Flack faced when she took her own life in 2019. Although it is not proven, in the lead up to her death she was the face of numerous news tabloids hounding a mix of facts and lies around her divorce and potential domestic abuse trial to the public pressure which is believed by many to be the tipping point that lead to her death. However, from this, her family and friends have set up a petition for ‘Caroline’s law’ which has recently been brought to the government to make media harassment a criminal offence. Thanks to the sharing of the link around social media, the petition has been signed by more than 850, 000 people. Without media, this would not have had this reach and the positive impact surrounding mental health being a recognised issue instead of ignored as it has been in that past. Due to this, both celebrities and ordinary citizens are beginning to receive equal treatment when it comes to the spread of false information. This is one example of the developing positive attitudes towards getting equal respect for both celebrity’s and ordinary citizens’ right to privacy as “All manner of privacy law are at a tipping point. ” When looking at modern day celebrities and their rights to privacy, it is essential we investigate the roles of the modern-day media outlets and their influence on a persons connotations. With the growing recognition and knowledge surrounding mental health, media outlets and the stigma around them has an ever-developing negative reputation for being the cause of all things damaging. The growing use of social media has allowed the reputation of celebrities to often be damaged through false information and negative influence being spread which inevitable leads to a decline in celebrities mental welfare if they became the victim of rumours which lead to define them. Author, Rosen speaks about this in his book arguing that privacy, for both ordinary citizens and celebrities, “blocks the flow of information in order to avoid error and misrepresentation”. This leads to the question of, if we are all under the same legal standing, why is it only ordinary citizens we consider the wellbeing of when publishing negative stories for the world’s entertainment? For example, the infamously controversial news tabloid, The Sun, made, at the time, newly hired football player, Raheem Sterling, front page news titled ‘Life and Times of footie idiot Raheem Sterling’. Compare this to a regular citizen having someone else’s opinion on all their past issues posted online simply because of starting a new job would not be tolerated and would class as workplace harassment. Due to this, Sterling later voiced his own opinion saying, “You put another five young kids at my age in that position and treat them like that — I don’t think a lot of them will come out the other side mentally right. ” It is arguable that what was said in Sterling’s destructive article was all true information with photographic evidence to prove it so it shouldn’t be an issue. If only facts are printed, is the issue that they’ve been exposed or that they got caught out doing something morally wrong? Celebrities, especially footballers, have always been in the public eye and should accept this is part of the job along with the outrageous pay checks that follow so should make sure they don’t do anything they think would tarnish their brand. Whereas for us ordinary citizens, we couldn’t be expected to stand for negative publicity aimed at us as we don’t have the same luxuries that would overall improve balance out the positives and the negatives. Much like this, there has been a plethora of reasons why the way we view celebrities and the right to their privacy have drastically changed over time compared to the ordinary citizen, the main one being the development of the internet. “The web was conceived as a tool for researchers and academics to share information… It is estimated that the web contains at least 25. 21 billion pages on an estimated 110 million websites”. Due to the idea of the internet starting so small, it is only imaginable that there was once a time where those of higher positions in society had their rumoured secrets spread through simple word of mouth, identical to how ordinary citizens had their allegations shared around the community. But, over time, the two positions have grown further apart in how they are discussed thanks to the ever-developing social media. This gap between the two groups of society has led to a rising amount of threats to the right of privacy of famous people as supported by Tweed’s statement, “What is now abundantly clear is that the advances in technology serve to provide an abundant array of tools which pose a very concrete threat to modern day privacy. ” The gossip of a celerity is now allowed to be spread like wildfire where a notification can be sent directly to your screen within minutes of it being published and whatever statement appears is believed as fact. The spread of gossip between ordinary citizens, although in some extreme cases can be brought online, often stays as rumours spread through word of mouth where the power of dismissal is active, and a reputation can be saved within a single conversation to correct facts. On the contrary, this perception has been disproved by American lawyers, Warren and Brandeis, in their 1890 law review saying, “To occupy the indolent, column upon column is filled with idle gossip, which can only be procured by intrusion upon the domestic circle. ”. Despite this extract being from the US so cannot be taken and applied directly to the right to privacy in the UK, it was published in the late 1800s and proves that there has always been a demand from the general public for gossip surrounding celebrities which means there has always been a concerning disrespect for celebrities right to privacy when compared to the ordinary citizens within western society. Modern day citizens seem to allow the right to privacy of celebrities to be dismantled when the product of the violation is for entertainment purposes e. g. scandals. Arguably the most famous example of the demands of public interest causing the media to go too far in lessening a celebrity’s right to privacy, is the death of Princess Diana Spencer when a paparazzi pursuit turned fatal. Two months before the death, the Protection from Harassment Act 1997 (PHA) was created, this made stalking and/or harassment illegal with the consequence being “A person guilty of an offence under this section is liable on summary conviction to imprisonment for a term not exceeding 51 weeks, or a fine not exceeding level 5 on the standard scale, or both. ” Albeit, too late, the PHA only became the go to remedy against paparazzi and the media after the Princess’ death. The Princess, who had left the royal family at this stage was one of the most photographed people in the world both during and after her marriage and public opinion turned sour when people began blaming the British tabloids for their deadly harassment of the people’s princess. In fact, after the passing of Princess Diana in 1997, “the public mood turned against paparazzi and the media, and as a consequence, British tabloids the Sun and the Mirror recorded their lowest sales figures since 1962. ” Thus showing that although there has always been a difference between the attitudes to the right to privacy celebrities and ordinary citizens have, a change has occurred in recent years where the public have began to realise the effect their desire for gossip has on celebrities lives causing celebrities an ordinary citizens to have an equal right to privacy, not lesser. Ongoing, during the time of Diana’s death, lawyer, Howard Kennedy, made the statement of “Privacy only existed in places like a doctor’s surgery, a confessional, a marital bed or the death bed. ” This is a key quote in describing the level of privacy celebrities received in the past, being one of many critiques on how the British tabloids treat the right to privacy. The damages awarded within these violations can only go so far as the information published not only affecting, as mentioned previously, the mental anguish of a famous figure in the public eye but also the financial aspects of their life. Max Mosley, celebrity and victim of a News of the World article, also critiqued the British tabloids treatment of celebrities by saying, "A section of the British press has for many years repeatedly gone well beyond the bounds of civilized behaviour, routinely breaking the law, ignoring rules devised by the newspaper industry itself and adopting a bullying and dishonest approach to litigation. " His violation of the right to privacy was possibly the most famous cases due to the damages awarded. Mosley was awarded £60, 000 in his battle over violation of his human right to freedom of expression. Established in the case of Handyside v UK, the ECHR stated, ““freedom of expression constitutes one of the essential foundations of a democratic society, one of the basic conditions for its progress and for the development of every man”, although over 40 years old, this statement is still applicable as without the expression of new ideas, there wouldn’t be the development our society shows today. Mosley’s lawsuit was the highest amount awarded as damages from an English court after videos and an article was posted of him attending a accused ‘nazi themed’ sex party. Mosley and the courts believed this was a reasonable amount due to the complete ruin of his reputation for him and his family. Mosley said, “once a story had been published, you could not "un-publish" it, and the damage had been done”. Although the obvious strain this rigmarole would have had on Mosley, the legal battle could not have included defamation as nothing published within the article was false. This meaning that what Mosley engaged in as a married man with fame was illegal and morally wrong. Mosley paid £2500 to engage in this sex party, along with cheating on his wife he also engaged in ‘nazi themed’ roleplay with video evidence. Although the accusation was denied raises worries of what can the media post if even the facts aren’t allowed? And would Mosley’s actions being rewarded so highly if he didn’t have such a status to defame in the first place. It’s possible if the same actions had been taken by an ordinary citizen, there wouldn’t have been such a positive outcome on the violation, instead an imprisonment for engaging in prostitution and promoting a racist political group meaning an inequality of right to privacy between ordinary citizens and celebrities. Unfortunately for future celebrity privacy violations, there has been an amendment causing the super-injunction to stop being granted by the courts. This was to prevent the reporting of a violation of privacy’s own existence to the public. Some would argue this allows complete transparency for the public to make their own opinions on celebrities based on their character but could also cause a lot of violations concerning celebrities private affairs. To conclude, celebrities have often had a lesser right to privacy compared to an ordinary citizen within the UK due to a demand from the public by using celebrity’s downfall as entertainment. However, due to several extreme cases, there is now a changing attitude to equalise the view of a celebrity having the same mental and financial agony a ordinary citizen would suffer if they were to suffer a public disgrace. Without these cases, the reform that is currently developing would not have taken place and there are only now the belief celebrities do not have a lesser right to privacy.
Under dictionary definition, a
celebrity
is “a
famous
person
,
especially
in entertainment or sport”. This, thanks to the advances of
social
media
, can
now
include anyone who has a talent for influencing or a lucky break by going viral.
Celebrities
and
ordinary
citizens
are ruled
under the same
law
within the UK legal system.
However
, there are numerous
examples
of either one
being viewed
as having a
lesser
right
to privacy within
modern
day
society
. This essay will indulge into the statutory aspects of the
right
to privacy whilst comparing the
different
reasons for why a
celebrity’s’
right
to privacy is
sometimes
viewed as
lesser
than everyone else. These being
mental
health,
past
vs present views,
social
media
and the remedies
surrounding
privacy protection.

From a legislative standpoint, there is no direct
right
to privacy act for us in the UK,
however
there is the Equality Act made in 2010, which states “(1)A
person
harasses another if (b) the conduct has the purpose or effect of (i) violating B’s dignity”. This is the same ruling for both
celebrities
and
ordinary
citizens
however
often
ignored
for those
famous
individuals within the UK as shown in the incidents of
media
harassment
.
Sadly
, this being
accepted
as normal in the
modern
day can
lead
to the devastating
end
that TV presenter Caroline Flack faced when she took her
own
life in 2019. Although it is not proven, in the
lead
up to her death she was the face of numerous
news
tabloids
hounding a mix of facts and lies
around
her divorce and potential domestic abuse trial to the
public
pressure which
is believed
by
many
to be the tipping point that
lead
to her death.
However
, from this, her family and friends have set up a petition for ‘Caroline’s
law’
which has recently
been brought
to the
government
to
make
media
harassment
a criminal
offence
. Thanks to the sharing of the link
around
social
media
, the petition has
been signed
by more than 850, 000
people
. Without
media
, this would not have had this reach and the
positive
impact
surrounding
mental
health being a
recognised
issue
instead
of
ignored
as it has been in that
past
.
Due
to this, both
celebrities
and
ordinary
citizens
are beginning to receive equal treatment when it
comes
to the
spread
of false
information
. This is one
example
of the developing
positive
attitudes towards getting equal respect for both
celebrity’s
and
ordinary
citizens’
right
to privacy as “All manner of privacy
law
are at a tipping point. ”

When looking at
modern
day
celebrities
and their
rights
to privacy, it is essential we investigate the roles of the modern-day
media
outlets and their influence on a
persons
connotations. With the growing recognition and knowledge
surrounding
mental
health,
media
outlets and the stigma
around
them has an ever-developing
negative
reputation
for being the cause of all things damaging. The growing
use
of
social
media
has
allowed
the
reputation
of
celebrities
to
often
be damaged
through false
information
and
negative
influence being
spread
which inevitable leads to a decline in
celebrities
mental
welfare if they became the victim of
rumours
which
lead
to define them. Author,
Rosen
speaks about this in his book arguing that privacy, for both
ordinary
citizens
and
celebrities
, “blocks the flow of
information
in order to avoid error and misrepresentation”.

This leads to the question of, if we are all under the same legal standing, why is it
only
ordinary
citizens
we consider the
wellbeing
of when publishing
negative
stories for the world’s entertainment? For
example
, the
infamously
controversial
news
tabloid
, The Sun, made, at the
time
,
newly
hired football player,
Raheem
Sterling
, front page
news
titled ‘Life and
Times
of footie idiot
Raheem
Sterling’
. Compare this to a regular
citizen
having someone else’s
opinion
on all their
past
issues
posted online
simply
because
of starting a
new
job would not
be tolerated
and would
class
as workplace harassment.

Due to this,
Sterling
later voiced his
own
opinion
saying, “You put another five young kids at my age in that position and treat them like that — I don’t
think
a lot of
them will
come
out the other side mentally
right
. ” It is arguable that what
was said
in
Sterling’s
destructive
article
was all true
information
with photographic evidence to prove it
so
it shouldn’t be an
issue
. If
only
facts
are printed
, is the
issue
that they’ve
been exposed
or that they
got
caught out doing something
morally
wrong
?
Celebrities
,
especially
footballers, have always been in the
public
eye and should accept this is part of the job along with the outrageous pay
checks
that follow
so
should
make
sure they don’t do anything they
think
would tarnish their brand. Whereas for us
ordinary
citizens
, we couldn’t be
expected
to stand for
negative
publicity aimed at us as we don’t have the same luxuries that would
overall
improve
balance out the
positives
and the negatives.

Much like this, there has been a plethora of reasons why the way we view
celebrities
and the
right
to their privacy have
drastically
changed
over
time
compared to the
ordinary
citizen
, the main one being the development of the internet. “The web
was conceived
as a tool for researchers and academics to share
information…
It
is estimated
that the web contains at least 25. 21 billion pages on an estimated 110 million websites”.
Due
to the
idea
of the internet starting
so
small
, it is
only
imaginable that there was once a
time where
those of higher positions in
society
had their
rumoured
secrets
spread
through simple word of mouth, identical to how
ordinary
citizens
had their allegations shared
around
the community.
But
,
over
time
, the two positions have grown
further
apart in how they
are discussed
thanks to the ever-developing
social
media
. This gap between the two groups of
society
has led to a rising amount of threats to the
right
of privacy of
famous
people
as supported by Tweed’s
statement
, “What is
now
abundantly
clear
is that the advances in technology serve to provide an abundant array of tools which pose a
very
concrete threat to
modern
day privacy. ” The
gossip
of a celerity is
now
allowed
to be
spread
like wildfire where a notification can be
sent
directly
to your screen within minutes of it
being published
and whatever
statement
appears
is believed
as
fact
. The
spread
of
gossip
between
ordinary
citizens
, although in
some
extreme cases can
be brought
online,
often
stays as
rumours
spread
through word of mouth where the power of dismissal is active, and a
reputation
can
be saved
within a single conversation to correct facts.

On the contrary
, this perception has
been disproved
by American lawyers, Warren and Brandeis, in their 1890
law
review saying, “To occupy the indolent, column upon column
is filled
with idle
gossip
, which can
only
be procured
by intrusion upon the domestic circle. ”. Despite this extract being from the US
so
cannot
be taken
and applied
directly
to the
right
to privacy in the UK, it
was published
in the late 1800s and proves that there has always been a demand from the general
public
for
gossip
surrounding
celebrities
which means there has always been a concerning disrespect for
celebrities
right
to privacy when compared to the
ordinary
citizens
within western
society
.
Modern
day
citizens
seem to
allow
the
right
to privacy of
celebrities
to
be dismantled
when the product of the
violation
is for entertainment purposes
e. g.
scandals.

Arguably
the most
famous
example
of the demands of
public
interest causing the
media
to go too far in lessening a
celebrity’s
right
to privacy, is the death of Princess Diana Spencer when a paparazzi pursuit turned fatal. Two months
before
the death, the Protection from
Harassment
Act 1997 (PHA)
was created
, this made stalking and/or
harassment
illegal with the consequence being “A
person
guilty of an
offence
under this section is liable on summary conviction to imprisonment for a term not exceeding 51 weeks, or a fine not exceeding level 5 on the standard scale, or both. ” Albeit, too late, the PHA
only
became the
go to
remedy against paparazzi and the
media
after the Princess’ death.

The Princess, who had
left
the royal family at this stage was one of the most photographed
people
in the world both during and after her marriage and
public
opinion
turned sour when
people
began blaming the British
tabloids
for their deadly
harassment
of the
people’s
princess. In
fact
, after the passing of Princess Diana in 1997, “the
public
mood turned against paparazzi and the
media
, and as a consequence, British
tabloids
the Sun and the Mirror recorded their lowest sales figures since 1962. ”
Thus
showing that although there has always been a difference between the attitudes to the
right
to privacy
celebrities
and
ordinary
citizens
have, a
change
has occurred in recent
years where
the
public
have
began
to
realise
the effect their desire for
gossip
has on
celebrities
lives
causing
celebrities
an
ordinary
citizens
to have an equal
right
to privacy, not lesser.

Ongoing, during the
time
of Diana’s death, lawyer, Howard Kennedy, made the
statement
of “Privacy
only
existed in places like a doctor’s surgery, a confessional, a marital bed or the death bed. ” This is a key quote in describing the level of privacy
celebrities
received in the
past
, being one of
many
critiques on how the British
tabloids
treat the
right
to privacy. The damages
awarded
within these
violations
can
only
go
so
far as the
information
published not
only
affecting, as mentioned previously, the
mental
anguish of a
famous
figure in the
public
eye
but
also
the financial aspects of their life.

Max Mosley,
celebrity
and victim of a
News
of the World
article
,
also
critiqued the British
tabloids
treatment of
celebrities
by saying,

"
A section of the British press has for
many
years
repeatedly
gone well beyond the bounds of civilized
behaviour
,
routinely
breaking the
law
, ignoring
rules
devised by the newspaper industry itself and adopting a bullying and dishonest approach to litigation.
"


His
violation
of the
right
to privacy was
possibly
the most
famous
cases
due
to the damages
awarded
. Mosley was
awarded
£60, 000 in his battle
over
violation
of his human
right
to freedom of expression. Established in the case of
Handyside
v UK, the
ECHR
stated, ““freedom of expression constitutes one of the essential foundations of a democratic
society
, one of the basic conditions for its progress and for the development of every
man
”, although
over
40 years
old
, this
statement
is
still
applicable as without the expression of
new
ideas
, there wouldn’t be the development our
society
shows
today
. Mosley’s lawsuit was the highest amount
awarded
as damages from an English court after videos and an
article
was posted
of him attending
a
accused ‘
nazi
themed’ sex party. Mosley and the courts believed this was a reasonable amount
due
to the complete ruin of his
reputation
for him and his family.
Mosley
said, “once a story had
been published
, you could not
"
un-publish
"
it, and the
damage
had
been done
”.

Although the obvious strain this rigmarole would have had on Mosley, the legal battle could not have included defamation as nothing published within the
article
was false. This meaning that what Mosley engaged in as a married
man
with fame was illegal and
morally
wrong
. Mosley paid £2500 to engage in this sex party, along with cheating on his wife he
also
engaged in ‘
nazi
themed’
roleplay
with video evidence. Although the accusation
was denied
raises worries of what can the
media
post if even the facts aren’t
allowed
? And would Mosley’s actions
being rewarded
so
highly
if he didn’t have such a status to defame in the
first
place. It’s possible if the same actions had
been taken
by an
ordinary
citizen
, there wouldn’t have been such a
positive
outcome on the
violation
,
instead
an imprisonment for engaging in prostitution and promoting a racist political group meaning an inequality of
right
to privacy between
ordinary
citizens
and celebrities.

Unfortunately for future
celebrity
privacy
violations
, there has been an amendment causing the super-injunction to
stop
being granted
by the courts. This was to
prevent
the reporting of a
violation
of privacy’s
own
existence to the
public
.
Some
would argue this
allows
complete transparency for the
public
to
make
their
own
opinions
on
celebrities
based on their character
but
could
also
cause
a lot of
violations
concerning
celebrities
private affairs.

To conclude
,
celebrities
have
often
had a
lesser
right
to privacy compared to an
ordinary
citizen
within the UK
due
to a demand from the
public
by using
celebrity’s
downfall as entertainment.
However
,
due
to several extreme cases, there is
now
a changing attitude to
equalise
the view of a
celebrity
having the same
mental
and financial agony
a
ordinary
citizen
would suffer if they were to suffer a
public
disgrace. Without these cases, the reform
that is
currently
developing would not have taken place and there are
only
now
the belief
celebrities
do not have a
lesser
right
to privacy.
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