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Causes of global warming and solutions of this

Causes of global warming and solutions of this OrwqE

Global warming stand out from all of problems which we have and lots of people and scientists attach importance to this problem. Humans give rise to global warming, by their activities. First of all the gas released from transport full damages to plants and nature. Secondly - plastic, we use lots of plastic material in our life, plastic bags, products with plastic packing and also bottle of water and amount of people throw away their trash on the way. Finally the one of significant cause is deforestation and fires in forest by human side. And the main question consist of that how we can change, what's the solution of this global problem? The main point is that we should use less automobile and use more ecological transport, such as bicycle. Also we should be more attentive to tries and animals, we should save nature and wild nature, too

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Humans give rise to global warming, by their activities. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
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 the one of significant cause is deforestation and fires in forest by human side.

And the main question consist of that how we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
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, what's the solution of this global problem?

The main point is that we should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
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 less automobile and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
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 more ecological transport, such as bicycle.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 we should be more attentive to tries and animals, we should save nature and wild nature, too