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In contemporary times, climate change, also known as global warming, is a worldwide environmental crisis. It is scientifically believed that climate transformation has disproportionately affected not only developing countries but also high-income countries. The purpose of this essay is to analyse the main causes of climate change and its devastating effects. It is clear that climate change can be caused by a number of factors. First of all, there is a causual link between global warming and intensive farming. There is evidence to demonstrate that industrial logging and illegal land exploitation for domestic livestock cultivation, crop plantations, construction or commercial agriculture have exerted an enormous threat to ecological system. Forests are strongly believed to act like a sponge absorbing a massive amount of CO2; however, when they are incinerated and left to decay, they discharge CO2 back into the atmosphere. Besides, toxic chemical substances, such as hazardous pesticides, fertilizers and insecticides, can be the main driver behind serious land degredation and desertification, which inevitably bring about dire climate change. More importantly, global warming can be directly attributable to burning of fossil fuels. Overconsumption of fossil fuels, including the mining of coal, oil and natural gas and the overabuse of these resources in electrical power plants, is widely accepted to be responsible for the significant increase in the concentration of CO2 in the atmosphere. In addition, once greenhouse gases emitted by burning of fossil fuels enter the atmosphere, they trap heat, causing the dramatic rise in average global temperatures. It is evident that climate change can have a wide range of damaging effects. First and foremost, global warming is generally accepted to have a ripple effect on many of Earth’s climatic processes. Climate transformation is closely connected to a greater likelihood of ecological catastrophies, including searing heat, intense rainfalls, tremendous storms, progressively common droughts, increasingly prevalent hurricanes… These weather hazards have upset the food chain, severely interfered with agricutural production, and badly struck transportation, infrastructure, service and facilities. In addition to extreme weather, there is a strong association between climate change and loss of biodiversity. Evidence from paleoclimate studies shows that environmental cataclysms turn a warm, mild climate to an unhabitable one, which aggravates the negative effects of fragmented habitats on species abundance and diversity and results in mass displacement, population crash and critical food scarcity. For example, if globla warming continues unabated, a growing number of polar bears might face potential extinction because of ice thawing. In conclusion, climate change can be resulted from factory farming and overexploitation of fossil fuels. It is considered as the major driver behind changing weather patterns and shrinking habitats.
In contemporary times,
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climate
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change
,
also
known as
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global
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warming
, is a worldwide environmental crisis. It is
scientifically
believed that
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climate
transformation has
disproportionately
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affected
not
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only
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developing countries
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but
also
high-income countries. The purpose of this essay is to
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analyse
the main causes of
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climate
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change
and its devastating effects.

It is
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clear
that
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climate
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change
can
be caused
by a number of factors.
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First of all
, there is a
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causual
link between
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global
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warming
and intensive farming. There is evidence to demonstrate that industrial logging and illegal land exploitation for domestic livestock cultivation, crop plantations, construction or commercial agriculture have exerted an enormous threat to ecological system. Forests are
strongly
believed to act like a sponge absorbing a massive amount of CO2;
however
, when they
are incinerated
and
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left
to decay, they discharge CO2 back into the atmosphere.
Besides
, toxic chemical substances, such as hazardous pesticides, fertilizers and insecticides, can be the main driver behind serious land
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degredation
and desertification, which
inevitably
bring about dire
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climate
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change
. More
importantly
,
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global
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warming
can be
directly
attributable to burning of
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fossil
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fuels
. Overconsumption of
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fossil
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fuels
, including the mining of coal, oil and natural gas and the
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overabuse
of these resources in electrical power plants, is
widely
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accepted
to be responsible for the significant increase in the concentration of CO2 in the atmosphere.
In addition
, once greenhouse gases emitted by burning of
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fossil
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fuels
enter the atmosphere, they trap heat, causing the dramatic rise in average
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global
temperatures.

It is evident that
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climate
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change
can have a wide range of damaging effects.
First
and foremost,
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global
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warming
is
generally
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accepted
to have a ripple effect on
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many
of Earth’s climatic processes.
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Climate
transformation is
closely
connected to a greater likelihood of ecological
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catastrophies
, including searing heat, intense rainfalls, tremendous storms,
progressively
common droughts,
increasingly
prevalent hurricanes… These weather hazards have upset the food chain,
severely
interfered with
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agricutural
production, and
badly
struck transportation, infrastructure, service and facilities.
In addition
to extreme weather, there is a strong association between
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climate
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change
and loss of biodiversity. Evidence from
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paleoclimate
studies
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shows
that environmental cataclysms turn a warm, mild
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climate
to an
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unhabitable
one, which aggravates the
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negative
effects of fragmented habitats on species abundance and diversity and results in mass displacement, population crash and critical food scarcity.
For example
, if
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globla
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warming
continues unabated, a growing number of polar bears might face potential extinction
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because
of ice thawing.

In conclusion
,
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climate
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change
can
be resulted
from factory farming and overexploitation of
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fossil
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fuels
. It
is considered
as the major driver behind changing weather patterns and shrinking habitats.
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IELTS essay causes and effects of climate change

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