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It is not surprising that the issue of. . . . . . . . . . . . has attracted many heated debates, because of its impact on society. In this essay, I will discuss the major cause relating to the topic and try to suggest some solutions to overcome this disturbing problem. First of all, I’m starting with our dilemma. On the one hand, many men and women have a same sense about it. Therefore, four Swedish expert scientists had done a research and published some documents in 2012. According to them, . . . . . . . . . . . . . . this can be a good example to illustrate which. . . . . . . . . . . . . There is no doubt that there are many ideas of ways to tackle this bad situation. The best approach would be method of German, due to they have experienced about it since 1990’s. In a nutshell, the problem of. . . . . . could be sensibly and effectively solve if the above the measure were implemented by the authorities and the public.
It is not surprising that the issue of.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
has
attracted
many
heated debates,
because
of its impact on society. In this essay, I will discuss the major cause relating to the topic and try to suggest
some
solutions to overcome this disturbing problem.

First of all
, I’m starting with our dilemma. On the one hand,
many
men
and women have a same sense about it.
Therefore
, four Swedish expert scientists had done a research and published
some
documents in 2012. According to them
, .
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
this
can be a
good
example to illustrate which.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.


There is no doubt that there are
many
ideas
of ways to tackle this
bad
situation. The best approach would be method of German, due to they have experienced about it since
1990’s
.

In a nutshell, the problem of.
.
.
.
.
.
could
be
sensibly
and
effectively
solve if the above the measure
were implemented
by the authorities and the public.
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IELTS essay cause and solution in the bad situation

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
192 words
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5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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