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Cashless transaction order of the day most of the time people prefer using plastic cash do you think this is trend will be useful for the society.

Cashless transaction order of the day most of the time people prefer using plastic cash do you think this is trend will be useful for the society. m135O
There is no iota of doubt that mostly individuals prefer using the cards rather than cash. This phenomenon offering va multifurious benefits to people, however sometimes a couple of problem emerge due to some reasons. the following paragraph would shed light on both the pros and cons of the plastic cash To begin with the first notion that, electronic transactions are gradually replacing the traditional banking system. Electronic transactions and plastic card payments are more convenient. Individual neither carry a huge amount of money nor cheque, which mostly people carry in previous time. in addition, it is supporting the growth of e-commerce. online payments amenities is provided nowadays I would like to site an example of electricity bills it is quite easy to pay the bills I hate to standing in a long queue for hours but today just with the help of cards we can pay the bills from the home additionally it is time saving method also just few in hours we can pay any type of bills on the flip side of the coin, there are some nasty consequences as well the major threat to using the cards is data hacking and cyber crime. first and foremost card are not acceptable in small vendors because they don't have a knowledge about the transection machine. secondly sometimes the online payment mode rejected due to the technical issues also some additional charges included in the online transaction. Furthermore, people don't have knowledge about the online transaction they mostly prefer cash system In conclusion I personally believe that merits are number the demerits however some efforts like government should introduced some rules against the hacking. there are plethora of advantages but we have to be careful how to use the system
There is no iota of doubt that
mostly
individuals prefer using the
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cards
rather
than cash. This phenomenon offering
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va
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multifurious
benefits to
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people
,
however
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sometimes
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a couple of problem
emerge due to
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some
reasons.
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the
following paragraph would shed light on both the pros and cons of the plastic
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cash


To
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begin
with the
first
notion that, electronic
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transactions
are
gradually
replacing the traditional banking system. Electronic
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transactions
and plastic
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card
payments are more convenient. Individual neither carry a huge amount of money nor
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cheque
, which
mostly
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people
carry in previous time.
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in
addition, it is supporting the growth of e-commerce.
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online
payments amenities
is provided
nowadays I would like to site an example of electricity bills it is quite easy to pay the bills I hate to standing in a long queue for hours
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but
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today
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just
with the
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help
of
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cards
we can pay the bills from the home
additionally
it is time saving method
also
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just
few in hours we can pay any type of
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bills


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on
the flip side of the coin, there are
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some
nasty consequences
as well
the major threat to using the
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cards
is data hacking and cyber crime.
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first
and foremost
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card
are not acceptable in
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small
vendors
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because
they don't have a knowledge about the
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transection
machine.
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secondly
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sometimes
the
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online
payment mode rejected due to the technical issues
also
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some
additional charges included in the
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online
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transaction
.
Furthermore
,
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people
don't have knowledge about the
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online
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transaction
they
mostly
prefer cash system

In
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conclusion I
personally
believe that merits are number the demerits
however
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some
efforts like
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government
should
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introduced
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some
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rules
against the hacking.
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there
are plethora of advantages
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but
we
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have to
be careful how to
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use
the
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system
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IELTS essay Cashless transaction order of the day most of the time people prefer using plastic cash do you think this is trend will be useful for the society.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
290 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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