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Cars have a greater negative impact than positive in our quality lifestyle. Do you agree?

Cars have a greater negative impact than positive in our quality lifestyle. Do you agree? gALea
Technological innovations our lives have become very comfortable. Such as technological innovation is a transport which essential in our lives. Car is an essential transport in our modern life and car reflect our social status. Without car we can not survive in this modern world because most of the time we use car and it has reduced our travel time so that we can use that time for other purpose. People can easily move from one place to another place and it is provide much more freedom. We can easily be going to job by the car and also car provide a lot of security and privacy such as, if we use public transport there have no freedom and any privacy. Moreover, cars are helpful for emergency time fore example, if someone fill illness at the middle of the night, we can quickly be taken to hospital. Privet car is a convenient mode of transportation. Car is little bit expensive everyone cannot afford the car and also it is create discrimination between reach and pore. Furthermore, car create a lot of pollution and emit harmful gas which is bad for the environment and human. In addition, this gas are responsible for global warming and people are attract several diseases for this gas. Moreover, car occupy a lot of space in road and also create a lot of congestion. By the privet car day by day increased accident. It is maintains cost very high from the other transport. To sum-up, I think the privet car more positive aspect then negative ones. car is very important in our lives and it is provide lot of facility.
Technological innovations our
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lives
have become
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very
comfortable. Such as technological innovation is a transport which essential in our
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lives
.

Car is
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an essential transport
in our modern life and
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car
reflect our social status. Without
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car we
can not survive in this modern world
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because
most of the
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time
we
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use
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car
and it has
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reduced
our travel
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time
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so
that we can
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use
that
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time
for other purpose.
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People
can
easily
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move
from one place to another place and it is
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provide
much more freedom. We can
easily
be going to job by the
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car
and
also
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car
provide a
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lot
of security and privacy such as, if we
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use
public transport there have no freedom and any privacy.
Moreover
,
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cars
are helpful for emergency
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time
fore example, if someone
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fill
illness at the middle of the night, we can
quickly
be taken
to hospital. Privet
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car
is a convenient mode of transportation.

Car is
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little bit
expensive everyone cannot afford the
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car
and
also
it is
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create
discrimination between reach and pore.
Furthermore
,
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car
create a
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lot
of pollution and emit harmful gas which is
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bad
for the environment and human.
In addition
,
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this gas are
responsible for global warming and
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people
are attract several diseases for this gas.
Moreover
,
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car
occupy a
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lot
of space in road and
also
create a
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lot
of congestion. By the privet
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car
day by day increased accident. It is maintains cost
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very
high from the other transport.

To sum-up, I
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think
the privet
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car
more
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positive
aspect
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then
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negative
ones.
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car
is
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very
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important
in our
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lives
and it is
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provide
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lot of
facility.
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IELTS essay Cars have a greater negative impact than positive in our quality lifestyle. Do you agree?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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