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My favorite subject is English, Well, I've loved English since the end of 4th grade because I heard my parents say that if I got a scholarship to study abroad, I could study abroad and from there I started to like English. But I wasn't really determined to study because I thought I was good. It wasn't until the beginning of 7th grade that I really worked hard on this subject, so why did I suddenly study English so hard? Last summer in 6th grade, I came across a youtube video where people talked about the types of people who were difficult to get a scholarship and the types of people mentioned were similar to me. I just think back that at the end of 5th grade, I took the test to get into a bilingual class and I failed immediately, but I really didn't care at the time. And after thinking about it, I realized that I am much worse than you guys, so I planned to study IELTS in grade 8 as well as find a lot of things related to learning English and grade 7 to improve my English level. His brother. Yeah, this is an English book that I'm studying, this book is called "English Grammar in Use" which is difficult but also very useful. hmm, sometimes I pull these out to study as well. My English is not very good, so I hope everyone can understand and can give me suggestions. And thanks for listening! OK, let's stop here! Goodbye!
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IELTS essay Tell about your favorite subject?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
255 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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