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Cars are used in this modern era rather than use of public transportation what are the reason behind this trend and how people can be encouraged to use public mode of transportation

Cars are used in this modern era rather than use of public transportation what are the reason behind this trend and how people can be encouraged to use public mode of transportation bE2q3
Using of private transportation is being increased each day instead of taking public transportation for going one place to another place in order to get convenient journey. In this essay I will discuss why people give preference using of personal vehicles and how individuals can be get encouraged towards use of buses. There are multifarious reasons, why personal cars are used by a great deal of people. First and foremost, is the status in society. In other words one give preference to do travel on cars in order to show their opulence in front of society. Apart from this, privacy also can be maintained with the help of personal mode of transportation and luggage also can be carry. If one carry their luggage on buses then harassment have to face. Moreover, time cannot only be saved but one also can get much facilities during travel on cars. On the flip side, despite of having these amenities one ought to be encouraged towards public transport. Therefore government ought to spread awareness how public means of transportation are eco friendly for Hunan and one can save environment to get polluted. Furthermore all facilities should be provided in public transportation owing to fact that, one would give preference to take public buses instead of using personal vehicles. To conclude, it can be stated that, although there are majority of facilities which can be got by using personal vehicle. Yet one should be encouraged for using public transportation it can be possible with the help of government.
Using of private
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transportation
is
being increased
each day
instead
of taking
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public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transportation
for going one place to another place in order to
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get
convenient journey. In this essay I will discuss why
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people
give preference using of
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personal
vehicles and how individuals can be
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get
encouraged towards
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use
of buses.

There are multifarious reasons, why
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personal
cars are
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used
by a great deal of
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people
.
First
and foremost, is the status in society.
In other words
one give preference to do travel on cars in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
their opulence in front of society. Apart from this, privacy
also
can
be maintained
with the
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help
of
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personal
mode of
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transportation
and luggage
also
can be
Consider using a past participle here: "carried".
carry
. If one carry their luggage on buses then harassment
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have to
face.
Moreover
, time cannot
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only
be saved
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but
one
also
can
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get
Use "many" with countable nouns.
much
facilities during travel on cars. On the flip side,
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despite of
having these amenities one ought to
be encouraged
towards
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public
transport.
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Therefore
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government
ought to spread awareness how
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public
means of
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transportation
are
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
eco friendly
for Hunan and one can save environment to
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get
polluted.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Furthermore
all facilities should
be provided
in
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public
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transportation
owing to fact that, one would give preference to take
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public
buses
instead
of using
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personal
vehicles.
To conclude
, it can
be stated
that, although there are
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majority of
facilities which can be
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got
by using
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
personal
vehicle.
Yet
one should
be encouraged
for using
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public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transportation
it can be possible with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
.
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IELTS essay Cars are used in this modern era rather than use of public transportation what are the reason behind this trend and how people can be encouraged to use public mode of transportation

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
253 words
5.5
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