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Cars are the danger to human life today? Give your opinion

Cars are the danger to human life today? Give your opinion RRyb8
Nowadays, Cars are using hazart for people life. In my view, it is people themselves who cause the greatest harm to society, not technology or machines as such. In the first plac, car are not jeopardly when people drive carefully but it is the human themselves who are to blame for these dangerous conditions. In addition to this most people listen to music while driving a car and don't attention to the side circumference. Therefore, we should be cautious and most importantly, we must follow the rules of the road. For example my brother was in a car accident while driving careledd, he was audation to music lustily and was driving very fastSecondly, As we see it, If cars were banned, weather would be less polluted. The driving a car security for humans life in spite of it is unprofitable for people health what is more exhaust fumes are one of the major causes of air pollution and as a result, our health is risk as well as the environnent but lokewise it is the humans themselves who are to blame this conditions For instance it is also good for humans health to go to the wrong place by car for example to go to a nearby place by bicycle. To conclude, the car should be driven only when necessary, because the exhaust fumes from it is dengerous to human life.
Nowadays,
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hazart
for
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people
life. In my view, it is
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people
themselves who cause the greatest harm to society, not technology or machines as such.

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first
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plac
,
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car
are not
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jeopardly
when
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people
drive
carefully
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it is the
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human
themselves who are to blame for these
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dangerous
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In
addition to this most
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people
listen to music while
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driving
a
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car
and don't attention to the side circumference.
Therefore
, we should be cautious and most
importantly
, we
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must
follow the
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rules
of the road.
For example
my brother was in a
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car
accident while
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driving
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careledd
, he was
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audation
to music
lustily
and was
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driving
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very
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fastSecondly
, As we
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see
it, If
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cars
were banned
, weather would be less polluted. The
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driving
a
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car
security for
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humans
life
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in spite of
it is unprofitable for
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people
health
what is more
exhaust fumes are one of the major causes of air pollution and
as a result
, our health is
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risk
as well
as the
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environnent
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but
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humans
themselves who are to blame this conditions
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it is
also
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good
for
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humans
health to go to the
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wrong
place by
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car
for example
to go to a nearby place by bicycle.
To conclude
, the
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car
should
be driven
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only
when necessary,
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because
the exhaust fumes from it is
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dengerous
to
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human
life.
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IELTS essay Cars are the danger to human life today? Give your opinion

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
231 words
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