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Carrying CapacityAn animal species needs to have enough resources, like food and water, to survive in any given environment. However, because resources are limited, only a certain number of animals of a particular species are able to survive in a given ha v.1

Carrying CapacityAn animal species needs to have enough resources, like food and water, to survive in any given environment. However, because resources are limited, only a certain number of animals of a particular species are able to survive in a given ha v. 1
At present, it is commonly observed that an increasing number of people are travelling than they were in the past. This is because of recent improvements in the transportation industry which has enabled travellers to explore new places and cultures and enhance their mindset. To begin with, recent developments in different transportation means have significantly contributed to an increasing number of travellers. Due to these advancements, travelling has become much more faster, safer, reliable as well as affordable. For example, countrywide or international journey via air planes or express trains has become extremely convenient, safe and economical option for the majority of people. In contrast, if the transportation sector didn't have such advances, travelling would remain as difficult as it was in the past. Moreover, travelling offers a number of benefits to tourists which includes but not limited to discovering new places and cultures and building independent viewpoint about them. Currently, there are numerous channels such as National Geographic, Discovery and BBC World etc. Which provide information about geography, people, culture, and natural resources of different countries, but the quality of experiencing these territories by visiting them directly is priceless. Moreover, visiting new venues also develops one's unbiased opinion about them. In conclusion, as a result of advanced transportation, the number of tourists has increased today as compared to the past. This has allowed them to discover new horizons directly by themselves and have their own perception without any prejudice.
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commonly
observed that an increasing
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number
of
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people
are
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travelling
than they were in the past. This is
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because
of recent improvements in the
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transportation
industry which has enabled
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travellers
to explore
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new
places and cultures and enhance their mindset.

To
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begin
with, recent developments in
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different
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transportation
means have
significantly
contributed to an increasing
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number
of
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travellers
. Due to these advancements,
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travelling
has become much
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more faster
, safer, reliable
as well
as affordable.
For example
, countrywide or international journey via air
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planes
or express trains has become
extremely
convenient, safe and economical option for the majority of
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people
.
In contrast
, if the
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transportation
sector didn't have such advances,
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travelling
would remain as difficult as it was in the past.

Moreover
,
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travelling
offers a
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number
of benefits to tourists which includes
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but
not limited to discovering
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new
places and cultures and building independent viewpoint about them.
Currently
, there are numerous channels such as National Geographic, Discovery and BBC World etc. Which provide information about geography,
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people
, culture, and natural resources of
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different
countries,
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but
the quality of experiencing these territories by visiting them
directly
is priceless.
Moreover
, visiting
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new
venues
also
develops one's unbiased opinion about them.

In conclusion
,
as a result
of advanced
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transportation
, the
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number
of tourists has increased
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today
as compared to the past. This has
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allowed
them to discover
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new
horizons
directly
by themselves and have their
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own
perception without any prejudice.
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IELTS essay Carrying CapacityAn animal species needs to have enough resources, like food and water, to survive in any given environment. However, because resources are limited, only a certain number of animals of a particular species are able to survive in a given ha v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
240 words
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7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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