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car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. how true do you think this sentence is? what measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars.

"The car was made to have a comfortable place to sit at"People are in big danger if they do not stop using their cars on road. They have taken the invention of the car in the wrong way. The rapid increase in car ownership over the past thirty years has made many cities in this world 'one big traffic jam'. The subsequent paragraph elaborates more on the view with an appropriate illustration. The invention of the car was to make traveling easy for us and so that we can save time. We have taken this amazing technology to show off our wealth and pride. People own 2-3 cars to just flaunt. We do not realize the damage occurred because of so many cars on the road. For instance, an increase in pollution and traffic jams. In past, I remember I had to go for an exam. While traveling by car, I noticed a lot of pollution and also couldn't reach for the exam on time. I strongly believe that the increase in car ownership has a major impact on traffic jams on road. We have created a situation that we do not know and now we are facing many consequences. To change this situation government can implement some laws which should be followed strictly. Such as OOD-EVEN, this law was implemented in India and worked quite well, using public transport, etc.
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on road. They have taken the invention of the
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in the
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wrong
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car
ownership over the past thirty years has made
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many
cities in this world 'one
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traffic jam'. The subsequent paragraph elaborates more on the view with an appropriate illustration. The invention of the
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car
was to
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make
traveling easy for us and
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so
that we can save time. We have taken this amazing technology to
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show
off our wealth and pride.
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People
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own
2-3
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flaunt. We do not realize the damage occurred
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For instance
, an increase in pollution and traffic jams.
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car
, I noticed
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a lot of
pollution and
also
couldn't reach for the exam on time. I
strongly
believe that the increase in
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car
ownership has a major impact on traffic jams on road. We have created a situation that we do not
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know and
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now
we are facing
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consequences. To
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change
this situation
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government
can implement
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laws which should
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strictly
. Such as
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OOD-EVEN
, this law
was implemented
in India and worked quite well, using public transport, etc.
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IELTS essay car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. how true do you think this sentence is? what measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
231 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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