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Car increasing in world so that reason facing Problem traffic jam

Car increasing in world so that reason facing Problem traffic jam 9B3Y3
Nowadays, world increasing the technology and that reason people are developing the own facilities and that reason people are own car purchased and each family more than two three cars and that reason biggest problem of 'traffic jam' So govenment should warred about that situation and they can increase more texts and creates rules is each family each car. In conclusion that governments can stopped it is problem of applying for rules and plenty.
Nowadays, world increasing the technology and that reason
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people
are developing the
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own
facilities and that reason
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people
are
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own
car
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purchased
and each family more than two three cars and that reason
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biggest
problem of 'traffic jam'
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So
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govenment
should
The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: "war"
warred
about that
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situation and
they can increase more texts and creates
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rules
is each family each car.
In conclusion
that
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governments
can
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stopped
it is problem of applying for
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rules
and
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plenty
.

IELTS essay Car increasing in world so that reason facing Problem traffic jam

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
74 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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