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Car increasing in world so that reason facing Problem traffic jam

Car increasing in world so that reason facing Problem traffic jam 9B3Y3

Nowadays, world increasing the technology and that reason people are developing the own facilities and that reason people are own car purchased and each family more than two three cars and that reason biggest problem of 'traffic jam' So govenment should warred about that situation and they can increase more texts and creates rules is each family each car. In conclusion that governments can stopped it is problem of applying for rules and plenty.

Nowadays, world increasing the technology and that reason This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are developing the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 facilities and that reason This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 car This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 and each family more than two three cars and that reason A determiner is probably missing here: "the biggest".the biggest
biggest
 problem of 'traffic jam' This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
Possible spelling mistake found.government
govenment
 should The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: "war"war
warred
 about that Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).situation, and
situation and
 they can increase more texts and creates This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
 is each family each car. In conclusion
 that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritiespublic authorities
governments
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceaseddiscontinued
stopped
 it is problem of applying for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
plenty
. 