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Can you describe the people in your home town?

Can you describe the people in your home town? yN1kg

Well, like people in other countrysides, people in my home town do variety of jobs. Most of them work as workers and farmers. Ben Tre people are extremely kindness and friendly. Hard-working is also one of the characters they are their own. Everyday, people in there wake up early at 4 a. m or 5 a. m to prepare for their work. Even though it's a bit hard, they always have joys and love their life. After working, it's a time for conversing each other of neiboughoods. Their life is really peaceful. Specially, people in my home town are very hospitable. Once come to here, you will to be a member of family.

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