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CAN TECHNOLOGY REPLACE HUMANS IN THE FUTURE

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Many occupations will be replaced by technology, and some are not, in the same way, that new farming equipment replaced people and horses during the industrial revolution. Humans, on the other hand, will be required to develop and deliver value in whole new ways for new business models. Humans are also the ones that invent and operate technology to make their lives easier and more contemporary. There will be no technology if people do not exist.
Many
occupations will
be replaced
by technology, and
some
are not,
in the same way
, that new farming equipment replaced
people
and horses during the industrial revolution. Humans,
on the other hand
, will
be required
to develop and deliver value in whole new ways for new business models. Humans are
also
the ones that invent and operate technology to
make
their
lives
easier and more contemporary. There will be no technology if
people
do not exist.
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IELTS essay CAN TECHNOLOGY REPLACE HUMANS IN THE FUTURE

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  American English
1 paragraphs
76 words
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