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Can one day change your life? Have the events on a single day had a major influence on your life? Write about your experience, and say how it changed your life.

Can one day change your life? Have the events on a single day had a major influence on your life? Write about your experience, and say how it changed your life. rLEkn

Every day we experience and grow. For that reason, every day counts and one of them can make a major change in our life or who we are. Firstly, memories are part of ourselves and actually, they are associated with a specific day that change completely our lives or our personalities. For example, I remember the first time that Iperformed in a judo competition and I won a medal, it makes me realized that I can conquer whatever goal I put to myself if I work hard. Furthermore, I think that it changes me a lot because I change my mind about being successful in something. Because of that, the relevance of that day was important for me. Although I think it's completely different between one to other person what made an event to be really important for our future lives.

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