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Can man ever be able to stop aging? How far do you agree with this statement? Write an essay in not less than 225 words

Can man ever be able to stop aging? How far Write an essay in not less than 225 words NWKlb

Aging is something that bring change in internal and external structure, as the time passes by. It is biological change in every living organisms. In my opinion, aging is unstoppable phenomenon of life. It is the cause for biological or generation change human life. To illustrate the aging meaningfully, aging plays a vital role in maintaining the population. For example, increase in population can cause serious problems in human nature. What if everybody stop aging? and have eternal life? The consumption rate of food will gradually increase while the production rate will take deepest dive. Because of these reason, many people will die of hunger, poverty and they will start killing each other for food. Thus aging is very much essential to maintain the nature and social wellbeing. In conclusion, everybody wants to live forever and wants to see the future generation but, it is not the rule of life. We cannot go beyond the nature even if we try, it will cause a serious problems.

Aging is something that bring This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in internal and external structure, as the time passes by. It is biological This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in every living organisms.

In my opinion, aging is unstoppable phenomenon of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
. It is the cause for biological or generation This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 human You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
. To illustrate the aging meaningfully
, aging plays a vital role in maintaining the population. For example
, increase in population can cause serious problems in human nature. What if everybody The pronoun 'everybody' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "stops", "stopped".stopsstopped
stop
 aging? This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAnd
and
 have eternal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
? The consumption rate of food will gradually
 increase while the production rate will take A determiner is probably missing here: "the deepest".the deepest
deepest
 dive. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 of these reason, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :pass away
die
 of hunger, Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).poverty, and
poverty and
 they will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 killing each other for food. Thus
 aging is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much essential to maintain the nature and social Possible spelling mistake found.well-beingwell being
wellbeing
.

In conclusion
, everybody wants to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 forever and wants to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the future generation This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
, it is not the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirement
rule
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
. We cannot go beyond the nature even if we try, it will cause a serious Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "problem"?problem
problems
. 