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An argument two of your friends had

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Nowadays, many people do argument for many reasons and it is very common part of the life but I would like to talk about an argument two of my friends had and that argument was about the musical software related and that argument had last year between two of my friends their names are Anuj and Sarthak. They both are my friends and they are not only kind but also clever. They did an argument about software of music related because they both like to produce music and they both using different software to produce music and it solved by installing many plugins into the software and I felt very happy because they did argument and they both solved an argument by themselves. I remember last year Sarthak came from Canada to enjoy his vacation at that time me and Anuj went at airport to pick up him and we decided to spend time together so at first we went at Anuj’s home and we played many indoor games such as chess, carrom, cards, ludo and many more games then Sarthak told his experience about Canada country because before 5 years, after complete his 12th standard he went Canada for further study. He told us lots of things about Canada like how to apply for job, how can we get admission into the school or college, which types of currency or language people use and many more things and he also shared his experience about the music because he learnt how to produce music and then it was an argument between him and Anuj because Anuj like to us FL studio to produce music and Sarthak like Abalton studio to produce music and they did an argument for long time but after that they used both softwares and they liked both softwares. After that they installed many plugins into the software then they solved the argument and I can say that I felt very happy about an argument because they solved that themselves.
Nowadays,
many
people
do
argument
for
many
reasons and it is
very
common part of the life
but
I would like to talk about an
argument
two of my friends had and that
argument
was about the musical
software
related and that
argument
had last year between two of my friends their names are
Anuj
and
Sarthak
. They both are my
friends and
they are not
only
kind
but
also
clever. They did an
argument
about
software
of
music
related
because
they both like to
produce
music and
they both using
different
software
to
produce
music
and it
solved
by installing
many
plugins into the
software
and I felt
very
happy
because
they did
argument and
they both
solved
an
argument
by themselves. I remember last year
Sarthak
came from Canada to enjoy his vacation at that time me and
Anuj
went at airport to pick up
him and
we decided to spend time together
so
at
first
we went at
Anuj
’s
home and
we played
many
indoor games such as chess,
carrom
, cards, ludo and
many
more games
then
Sarthak
told
his experience about Canada country
because
before
5 years, after complete his 12th standard he went Canada for
further
study. He
told
us lots of things about Canada like how to apply for job, how can we
get
admission into the school or college, which types of currency or language
people
use
and
many
more
things and
he
also
shared his experience about the
music
because
he
learnt
how to
produce
music
and then it was an
argument
between him and
Anuj
because
Anuj
like to us FL studio to
produce
music
and
Sarthak
like
Abalton
studio to
produce
music and
they did an
argument
for long time
but
after that they
used
both
softwares and
they liked both
softwares
. After that they installed
many
plugins into the
software
then they
solved
the
argument
and I can say that I felt
very
happy about an
argument
because
they
solved
that themselves.
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IELTS essay An argument two of your friends had

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  American English
1 paragraphs
333 words
5.5
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