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BYOD is better than school equipment

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Bring Your Own Device is better than school equipment A lot of schools have to decide if they hand out equipment or the pupils do need to bring their own device. Is it even fair when not so fortunate pupil do need to bring their own devices? Bring Your Own Device is better than school equipment A lot of schools have to decide if they hand out equipment or the pupils do need to bring their own device. Is it even fair when not so fortunate pupil do need to bring their own devices? Bring Your Own Device is better than school equipment A lot of schools have to decide if they hand out equipment or the pupils do need to bring their own device. Is it even fair when not so fortunate pupil do need to bring their own devices?
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IELTS essay BYOD is better than school equipment

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
141 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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