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By punishing murderers with death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers.

Nowadays, crime rate has been increasing day by day in the world whether prison is the best method to give punishment or not. This essay is in agreement with the view that muderers should be punished with life in prison. In contrast punishing Muderers with death penalty creates disturbance in the society and people get step against the laws. For instance, if government give this punishment to everyone then many innocent human can be faced this punishment and they get critical punishment without doing any crime activity as result, society does not follow rules and regulations. On the flip side, discussing the first view others have feared to spend their life in prison. To illustrate, when anyone do crime, the person will be punished with life in prison which creates fear in the other hearts to do crime. Consequently, crime will be reduced. On the other hand, probability to do crime again may be reduced with this laws. for example, if anyone get punishment for their whole life, the person cannot perform crime again and again owing to the person spend their complete life in prison. eventually everyone follows rules and regulations. In conclusion, although death penalty helps to reduce crime rate however it is not good method to give punishment. so I think life in prison is best way to reduce crime without create any kind of disturbance and problem in the society.
Nowadays,
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crime
rate has been increasing day by day in the world whether
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prison
is the best method to give
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punishment
or not. This essay is in agreement with the view that
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muderers
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be punished
with
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life
in
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prison
. In
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contrast
punishing
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Muderers
with death penalty creates disturbance in the society and
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people
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get
step against the laws.
For instance
, if
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government
give this
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punishment
to everyone then
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many
innocent human can
be faced
this
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punishment and
they
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get
critical
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punishment
without doing any
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crime
activity as result, society does not follow
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rules
and regulations. On the flip side, discussing the
first
view others have feared to spend their
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life
in
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prison
. To illustrate, when anyone
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do
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crime
, the person will
be punished
with
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life
in
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prison
which creates fear in the other hearts to do
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crime
.
Consequently
,
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crime
will be
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reduced
.
On the other hand
, probability to do
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crime
again may be
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reduced
with
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this
laws.
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for
example, if anyone
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get
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punishment
for their whole
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life
, the person cannot perform
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crime
again and again owing to the person spend their complete
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life
in
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prison
.
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eventually
everyone follows
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rules
and regulations.
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, although death penalty
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helps
to
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reduce
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crime
rate
however
it is not
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good
method to give
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punishment
.
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so
I
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think
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life
in
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prison
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is best
way to
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reduce
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crime
without create any kind of disturbance and problem in the society.
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IELTS essay By punishing murderers with death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers.

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