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First Lady, breaking 5-day silence on the siege

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After 5 days of the riot in the capital and attack of the mob to the government building which is instigated by the president, Mrs. Trump break her silence a condemns the media due to their salacious gossips and false misleading in a statement which livid the official people and media because of she not condemning the mob first and she is caring more about being maligned. Some of her aides censured her statement not only because her criticism about the mob was like an addendum, but also neither she nor her husband accept the culpability of the tragedy. her statement was rife with errors and misspellings and was like a verbatim copy of another speech.

After 5 days of the riot in the capital and attack of the mob to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 building which is instigated
 by the president, Mrs. Trump break her silence a condemns the media due to their salacious gossips and false misleading in a statement which livid the official This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 and media Probable usage error. Use "because she" instead.because she
because of she
 not condemning the mob Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).first, and
first and
 she is caring more about being maligned
.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 of her aides censured her statement not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 her criticism about the mob was like an addendum, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 neither she nor her husband accept the culpability of the tragedy. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHer
her
 statement was rife with errors and misspellings and was like a verbatim copy of another speech. 