Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Buying fashionable clothes is wasteful because people do not need new clothes all the time.

Buying fashionable clothes is wasteful because people do not need new clothes all the time. ndo3P
Nowadays every part of society already have made improved due to globalisation. So that people can say what type of fashions are followed by other countries, what are the trend people doing, and so many things. Then most are start follow those fashions. Generally it is normal that follow latest fashions and trends. Because all of us like to be pretty and good looking. As a resort we are focusing to buy new and fashionable clothes. It is OK to buy a new and attractive wears. But some people shopping for pass their time, Or show their living status and so on. For example, there are a lot of rich business person's wives are going to shopping to show others, that they have lot of money. At the same time in their closets, there have lot of clothes not even weare at least single time. so those kind of activities of wasting time and money both. Friday more when we have to attend to party or any special occasion then we can go and buy something nice and fit to us. It is normal and not a waste. Not only in special occasion, but also if we feel, I need to wear something new and fashionable, then also we can go and buy. Being fashionable person is not a waste and use one pant for long period of time also not a saving everything. We all are like to see us on others eye, as an attractive person, beside just a one another person. And also life is short and we have to enjoy this life what we already have. So my opinion is buying fashionable clothes is not a waste and at the same time always no need to wear new clothes, but we always need to wear something good and new looking.
Nowadays every part of society already have made
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
due to
Possible spelling mistake. 'globalisation' is British English.
globalisation
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
can say what type of fashions
are followed
by other countries, what are the trend
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
doing, and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
things. Then most are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
follow those fashions.

Generally
it is normal that follow
A determiner is probably missing here: "the latest".
latest
fashions and trends.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
all of us like to be pretty and
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
good looking
. As a resort we are focusing to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fashionable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clothes
. It is OK to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buy
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
and attractive
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wears
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
shopping for pass their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
, Or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
their living status and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
on.

For example
, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
rich business person's wives are going to shopping to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
others, that they have lot of money. At the same
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
in their closets, there have
It seems that an article is missing.
lot of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clothes
not even
Possible spelling mistake found.
weare at
least single
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
so
Did you mean "this kind" or "those kinds"?
those kind
of activities of wasting
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
and money both.

Friday more when we
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
attend to party or any special occasion then we can go and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buy
something nice and fit to us. It is normal and not a waste. Not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
in special occasion,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
if we feel, I need to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wear
something
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fashionable
, then
also
we can go and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buy
. Being
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fashionable
person is not a waste and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
one pant for long period of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
also
not a saving everything. We all are like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
us on others eye, as an attractive person, beside
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
a one another person. And
also
life is
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
short and
we
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
enjoy this life what we already have.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
my opinion is buying
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fashionable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clothes
is not a waste and at the same
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
always no need to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wear
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clothes
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
we always need to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wear
something
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
looking.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Buying fashionable clothes is wasteful because people do not need new clothes all the time.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
304 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Buying fashionable clothes is wasteful because people do not need new clothes all the time.