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is change always a good thing?

is change always a good thing? 5LgND
There are two different kinds of people, one that supports the idea of change and feel it is for the best whereas there are other sector of people that are quite happy with their monotonous schedules. If not for evolution, discovering new things every other day and also embracing change, human beings might have halted at being homo neandrathals and would not have even explored the possibility of existing as homo sapiens. The current generation is going to flourish, if and when they step out. However, quite a few things are transforming at a rapid pace and like the saying goes- "too much of anything is not good" We, the people tend to forget out roots and run along with the hustle bustle of our surroundings. Some persons are smart emough in this era to make a wonderful routine for themselves and stick to it instead of rushing with their peers. In my opinion, even though being in a status quo seems comfortable. Is change even that uneasy of an option to think about? We living beings ought to realise that welcoming any shift possible with open arms can often lead to beautiful destinations and success always begins at the end of one's comfort zone. On one hand, people working in corporate jobs, doctors or any 9 to 5 job, will think a million times before leaving their profession to pursue their passion or any other thing for that matter. This behaviour can particularly can be narrowed down to two things- Family and fear. Can we blame them? No, as it is not everyone's of tea to take life as it comes with all its variations that it offers, some people find solace in avoiding shift of schedules and it is not always bad. For instance, any given person with a family of four to feed cannot hop aboard with constant changes. On the other hand, we, standing at the top of the food chain often fall prey to fear and doubt to even introduce a itsy-bitsy variation in our day to day life. India's political situation speaks for itself, this country had to go with a single political party, Congress for 15 long years to decide to give another one a chance as all of its population were quite skeptic about taking a different decision. The same goes with US, when they elected the magnificient being, Barack Obama, Unites States first president of colour and that nation did not once look back after this, they only soared high. The same applies to regular life, For instance, if I never took a leap of courage in changing my career option from engineering to medicine, I would have been stuck in a rut. In conclusion, Human beings are malleable and can adapt very effciently, so, its high time all of us collectively make a conscious decision to move forward with courage and deal with change with a hop on our feet,
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and feel it is for the best whereas there are
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people
that are quite happy with their monotonous schedules.

If not for evolution, discovering new things every
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day and
also
embracing
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change
, human beings might have halted at being homo
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neandrathals
and would not have even explored the possibility of existing as homo sapiens. The
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current
generation is going to flourish, if and when they step out.

However
, quite a few things are transforming at a rapid pace and like the saying goes-
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too much of anything is not
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good
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We, the
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tend to forget out roots and run along with the hustle bustle of our surroundings.
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Some
persons are smart
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in this era to
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a wonderful routine for themselves and stick to it
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of rushing with their peers.

In my opinion,
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being in a status quo seems comfortable. Is
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even that uneasy of an option to
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about?

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realise
that welcoming any shift possible with open arms can
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lead to
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destinations and success always
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at the
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of one's comfort zone.

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working in corporate jobs, doctors or any 9 to 5 job, will
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a million times
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leaving their profession to pursue their passion or any
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thing for that matter. This
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down to two things- Family and fear. Can we blame them? No, as it is not everyone's of tea to take life as it
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with all its variations that it offers,
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find solace in avoiding shift of schedules and it is not always
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bad
.
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person with a family of four to feed cannot hop aboard with constant
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changes
.

On the
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hand, we, standing at the top of the food chain
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fall prey to fear and doubt to even introduce
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variation in our
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day to day
life.

India's political situation speaks for itself, this country had to
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a single political party, Congress for 15 long years to decide to give another one a chance as all of its population were quite skeptic about taking a
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decision. The same goes with US, when they elected the
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being, Barack Obama, Unites States
first
president of
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and that nation did not once look back after this, they
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soared high. The same
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applies to
regular life,
For instance
, if I never took a leap of courage in changing my career option from engineering to medicine, I would have
been stuck
in a rut.

In conclusion
, Human beings are malleable and can adapt
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effciently
,
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, its high time all of us
collectively
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make
a conscious decision to
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move
forward with courage and deal with
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change
with a hop on our feet,
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IELTS essay is change always a good thing?

Essay
  American English
9 paragraphs
490 words
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