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BROADBAND AND LAPTOP REGISTRATION

BROADBAND AND LAPTOP REGISTRATION NwLe0

The basic features of the use cases in the system are joined by four actors such as students, suppliers, MIC and National Database. In this system, the student is one of the key actors who help the system to activate and operate the functions such as create an account, log in and submit the application, then keep tracking the status of the applications and receive the devices and send a confirmation for suppliers. The suppliers play the second most important role, who provide and deliver the devices to students, as well as tracking the delivery and reporting the quantity to MIC. In addition, MIC manages all applications and in some cases, MIC will proceed to review and approve applications manually with the supplement of the student's personal information. Furthermore, the student's family and personal information are retrieved from National Database which helps the system implements approving or rejecting the applications automatically at the stage submit the application.

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 cases in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withorganizationschemerulestructurearrangement
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joined
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system
, the student is one of the key actors who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
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system
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application
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 tracking the status of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctionoperationutilization
applications
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 a confirmation for suppliers.

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 role, who provide and deliver the devices to students, as well
 as tracking the delivery and reporting the quantity to MIC.

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applications
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applications
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 with the supplement of the student's personal information.

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 from National Database which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
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system
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applications
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