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Briefly describe yourself and your education life.

Briefly describe yourself and your education life. Jw0WB
My name is Cagatay. I am twenty-four years old. I was born in Izmir city. I did study elementary school in Izmir city. I went to the Mugla in 2017. Because, there had a first University. My first Univesity name "Mugla Sıtkı Kocman University". I did study Local Government. I study two years in Mugla city. Afterwards, I went to the Kutahya city. There I did study Political Science and International Relations department.
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. I am twenty-four years
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elementary school in Izmir city.
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Univesity
name
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Mugla
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Sıtkı
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Kocman
University
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. I did
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Local
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. I
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two years in
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Kutahya
city. There I did
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Political Science and International Relations department.

IELTS essay Briefly describe yourself and your education life.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
73 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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