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Books will disappear one day.

Books will disappear one day. NMEgN
Today's world is almost run by technology. We wake up and sleep in a technologically controlled atmosphere. Instead of waking up on our own, we need an alarm. While sleeping instead of fresh air, we use air conditioners. The same happens with the books. Nowadays craze for e-books is increasing a lot. The given topic compels us to think that in this new world, the youth prefer to read everything online rather than the physical books, magazines, and newspapers. More than the physical library building, this new generation believes in having a phone library. Today's people who prefer PDFs over textbooks will bring about an era when the physical reading material will be vanished of off the world. Some older people do not know much about the present technology and prefer reading tangible books to keep them alive. Further, some people have a hobby of collecting. Some have a home library full of books from different authors. From my point of view, these people are the only hope to these palpable books or else, someday this world will be full of e-books and the physical books and the physical books and newspapers will disappear. Lastly, I would like to say that more than choice, this is a question of necessity. The writer population if want to survive, will have to upload the stuff rather than publishing. Anyway, the current era will move on towards new times and bring about new changes in technology and diminish the scope for substantial books making way for the electronic versions of readable.
Today
's
world
is almost run by technology. We wake up and sleep in a
technologically
controlled atmosphere.
Instead
of waking up on our
own
, we need an alarm. While sleeping
instead
of fresh air, we
use
air conditioners. The same happens with the
books
. Nowadays craze for e-books is increasing a lot. The
given
topic compels us to
think
that in this
new
world
, the youth prefer to read everything online
rather
than the
physical
books
, magazines, and newspapers. More than the
physical
library building, this
new
generation believes in having a phone library.
Today
's
people
who
prefer PDFs over textbooks
will bring about an era when the
physical
reading material will
be vanished
of off the
world
.
Some
older
people
do not know much about the present technology and prefer reading tangible
books
to
keep
them alive.
Further
,
some
people
have a hobby of collecting.
Some
have a home library full of
books
from
different
authors. From my point of view, these
people
are the
only
hope to these palpable
books
or else, someday this
world
will be full of e-books and the
physical
books
and the
physical
books
and newspapers will disappear.
Lastly
, I would like to say that more than choice, this is a question of necessity. The writer population if want to survive, will
have to
upload the stuff
rather
than publishing. Anyway, the
current
era will
move
on towards
new
times and bring about
new
changes
in technology and diminish the scope for substantial
books
making way for the electronic versions of readable.
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IELTS essay Books will disappear one day.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
258 words
6.0
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