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book reader will decrease in future

I believe new technologies will obsolete books and reduce book readers in our society, for two specific reasons. First, there is more attractive entertainment for us. For example we can watch a video clip or play video games or spend time on social media instead of reading a book. Second, there are better and more convenient tools for learning new things or study. to be more specific, you can listen to an audiobook or listen to a podcast while you are driving which is more convenient than reading a book. And that's why I believe books will disappear from our houses.
I believe new technologies will obsolete
books
and
reduce
book
readers in our society, for two specific reasons.
First
, there is more attractive entertainment for us. For
example we
can
watch
a video clip or play video games or spend time on social media
instead
of reading a
book
. Second, there are better and more convenient tools for learning new things or study.
to
be more specific, you can listen to an audiobook or listen to a podcast while you are driving which is more convenient than reading a book.

And that's why I believe
books
will disappear from our
houses
.
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IELTS essay book reader will decrease in future

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
101 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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