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book reader will decrease in future

I believe new technologies will obsolete books and reduce book readers in our society, for two specific reasons. First, there is more attractive entertainment for us. For example we can watch a video clip or play video games or spend time on social media instead of reading a book. Second, there are better and more convenient tools for learning new things or study. to be more specific, you can listen to an audiobook or listen to a podcast while you are driving which is more convenient than reading a book. And that's why I believe books will disappear from our houses.

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